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Last Words (Free verse) by anagram

Too bad, I couldn't take the pace Living a life of disgrace I had to go , to get away Search myself to find the way So often in despair Quickly going nowhere Caution to the wind I blew up and I sinned We could not share you see Or could I live with me Or with being what I am Does anyone give a damn. CSN

god'swife 31-Aug-02/5:53 PM
Again it seems like you're not finishing what you've begun. The subject is missing. Take the shot, quit dribbling the ball. CSN makes me think of Crosby, Stills & Nash. Are those your initals?




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