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"The title is overused!" (Free verse) by vulcan
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"The title is overused!"
My professor said.
Four days,
Day and night,
Day and Night
In light,in Darkness
I tried to write
A poem that my name immortalizes
Bids men before my laurel bough
Fall to the ground,immediately bow!
"The title is overused!"
So my professor said.
2
Out in the street
Bacchus found me 'lone,
Hands in pockets,scratching my po'm.
Only he made a quick bow
"Come!Leth-ward we'll go!"
There by its shore,I saw
Dull-Gazes,Arms-Akimboes,
Yielded-Heads,Dancing-Legs
Sardonic-Smiles;
All detached,disillusioned,dismissed!
Big Lies!
"The title is overused!"
So my professor said.
3
It all happened overnight
I saw a girl from behind!
Pure-as -snow her legs
Seductive her girlish glide.
I pressed her hands theatrically
"Non sum qualis eram bonae sub regno Cynarae
I have been faithful to thee,Cynara!in my fashion!"
Thus in melancholy getting too far!
A childish cry
A slap in the face
A gust of blood
"Thunder and Lightning!"
The girl was seven years old!
4
"Pah,boy!come!I know what you want
Your reward lies in the fair house there!"
But...
I stepped in there
Lo!Pure-As-Snows everywhere!
Without any theatricall effect
I was invited to a bed
Saw Purity there stretched
Hymean hymn was all could be heard!
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Overused my title that night
Next day could not leave my bed
For a week dead sick!
For another grave melancholy
The day after all these
Quite another man.
6
The world is not fair
I'm not happy.
Women worm-like move
God is somewhere asleep.
I don't mean to be anything,
"The King is a thing...
Of what?
Of Nothing!"
7
Today the wind has a kindly touch
"Lilacs out of the dead land"have fairly bloomed;
Yet these things I can hardly watch
For My Day is in a mysterious nook,restless entombed.
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Posted: August 29, 2002 12:14 AM PDT; Last modified: August 30, 2002 12:21 AM PDT
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