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On waiting to pick up my lover on Friday

Member since 2002 · Posted 20 Sep 2002 · 4 comments

I realize I will no longer look at him the same, although he still skips from the school door, now he can cross-dress on his own, smile with different meanings, brush his own hair.

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[n/a] god'swife 20-Sep-02/10:45 AM Reply

bigbigcocksucker.

[n/a] <~> 20-Sep-02/10:56 AM Reply

bigbigidiot, just go away, k?

[n/a] nentwined 20-Sep-02/12:53 PM Reply

This actually has (in my mind) significantly different meaning that the original. I don't approve given the context of what you've already copied and how you've copied it, but I think this is valid. [yeah, like you fucking care, right?]

[n/a] <~> › nentwined 20-Sep-02/1:08 PM Reply

yes, it does have significantly different meaning, but it is an obvious copy--form and all. that's my beef. at least in the gone with the wind thing, the point of view changed. here, he's changed p&k's little girl into a transvestite/transsexual. it might be valid but it sure as hell ain't right. just my .02.