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On waiting to pick up my lover on Friday (Free verse) by bigbigdog I realize I will no longer look
at him the same,
although he still skips
from the school door,
now he can
cross-dress on his own,
smile with different meanings,
brush his own hair.
Up the ladder:
"The title is overused!"
Down the ladder:
Reptiles & Dust - Part One
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Posted: September 20, 2002 10:16 AM PDT; Last modified: September 20, 2002 10:16 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.9551764 Overall Rank: 8691 Comments:
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god'swife @ 66.14.87.50
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20-Sep-02/10:45 AM
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bigbigcocksucker.
bigbigidiot, just go away, k?
This actually has (in my mind) significantly different meaning that the original. I don't approve given the context of what you've already copied and how you've copied it, but I think this is valid. [yeah, like you fucking care, right?]
yes, it does have significantly different meaning, but it is an obvious copy--form and all. that's my beef. at least in the gone with the wind thing, the point of view changed. here, he's changed p&k's little girl into a transvestite/transsexual. it might be valid but it sure as hell ain't right. just my .02.
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