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On waiting to pick up my lover on Friday (Free verse) by bigbigdog

I realize I will no longer look at him the same, although he still skips from the school door, now he can cross-dress on his own, smile with different meanings, brush his own hair.

nentwined 20-Sep-02/12:53 PM
This actually has (in my mind) significantly different meaning that the original. I don't approve given the context of what you've already copied and how you've copied it, but I think this is valid. [yeah, like you fucking care, right?]




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