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So you want to be a father (Free verse) by april fool
If you want to be a father you have to sacrifice things to do you'd rather But you'll have a better life You won't be rich in pounds And that's a solid guarantee But in your wallet will be found Pictures - where cash used to be

Up the ladder: Feminism
Down the ladder: Attingere

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.428571
Weighted score: 4.846319
Overall Rank: 10599
Posted: August 11, 2002 7:32 AM PDT; Last modified: August 11, 2002 7:32 AM PDT
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[7] titan69 @ 195.93.50.157 | 11-Aug-02/11:59 AM | Reply
so true!!!!!
[10] electroman1979 @ 205.188.208.105 | 18-Oct-03/7:02 PM | Reply
thats the sign of a good father no doubt, but giving away money to make the life of your family better is not what matters, but it is good to be selfless as a father 10
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