Re: Performer by http://mulberryfairy	23-Aug-03/11:11 AM
Sweet child, interesting experience. LOVE
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Sep-03/3:51 PM
sounds like there's some guilt behind the pleasure of the apple juice and masturbating, yes?
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Sep-03/5:37 PM
Joe-joe, Joe-joe, you just can't write, Joe-joe, Joe-joe, try as you might. Joe-joe, Joe-joe, you numb Jesus freak, Joe-joe, Joe-joe, you poemranker geek. J-j, J-j, you make no sense, J-j, J-j, you are so dense.
Re: A new beginning by hobojo	16-Sep-03/3:46 PM
I liked the sweating part, but it needs more sex.
Re: Upside down and tigers by horus8	16-Sep-03/3:48 PM
Is it tigers that have forked penises?
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Sep-03/9:42 AM
OK, then, what can I do to make it better??
Re: Peach (Revision) by http://mulberryfairy	1-Sep-03/2:23 PM
No offense, but is remorselessly a word? One question: are you in love?
Re: Part I: The Peach by http://mulberryfairy	1-Sep-03/2:25 PM
I liked your statement "I guess that was that," but I want to know more. What else were you feeling? Relief that it was over? Not wanting it to be over?
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Sep-03/2:27 PM
Did you feel like you had been "picked clean" - by him or yourself? Was the squirrel a metaphor for something?
Re: Peach (Revision) by http://mulberryfairy	1-Sep-03/2:30 PM
I love the imagery here. I really felt this one. Was the desire to have something delicious all to yourself?
regarding some deleted poem...	27-Aug-03/4:18 PM
Please be gentle, I'm all vulnerable in love.
Re: summer heat blues by peaceseeker	25-Aug-03/8:32 AM
I'm glad you liked it, it's still a little bit of a "scratchy" one. A "hermaphrodite pickle" is a penis that is so small, the man could be considered a hermaphrodite.
Re: 8:45 AM Dentist Appointment by http://mulberryfairy	23-Aug-03/10:57 AM
Did you have a cleaning on the same day, after finding her in your closet?
Re: Voluptuous, Blonde Bird-Woman by http://mulberryfairy	23-Aug-03/10:59 AM
and after you "climb into her nestbed" ??
Re: Ode to a Pizza Hut Roach by http://mulberryfairy	23-Aug-03/11:02 AM
I have roaches in my building, for the first time in my life. Some have, like, twenty legs, long antennae, and spots. I would describe the roaches.
Re: Phone Support: To Lee by http://mulberryfairy	23-Aug-03/11:08 AM
Sweet friendship, but, isn't this a perfect example of how we're set up to not be close with the ones we love?
Re: Performer by http://mulberryfairy	23-Aug-03/11:11 AM
Sweet child, interesting experience. LOVE
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Aug-03/8:24 AM
Advice? Should I boycott his hot bar?
Re: Plastic is Forever by http://mulberryfairy	14-Sep-03/8:46 AM
Can you say more about the bruising? I imagine the mention of bruising has more significance than just its physicality on the arm. What are your thoughts on the friend's fervorous grip, and the narrator's bruising?
Re: body image by http://mulberryfairy	27-Sep-03/2:34 PM
It's interesting to me the way you related the suicide to the work-out class. I would like to see more about how the two are similar. Very well written, a perfect 10.