Re: 8:45 AM Dentist Appointment by http://mulberryfairy	23-Aug-03/10:57 AM
Did you have a cleaning on the same day, after finding her in your closet?
Re: Voluptuous, Blonde Bird-Woman by http://mulberryfairy	23-Aug-03/10:59 AM
and after you "climb into her nestbed" ??
Re: Ode to a Pizza Hut Roach by http://mulberryfairy	23-Aug-03/11:02 AM
I have roaches in my building, for the first time in my life. Some have, like, twenty legs, long antennae, and spots. I would describe the roaches.
Re: Phone Support: To Lee by http://mulberryfairy	23-Aug-03/11:08 AM
Sweet friendship, but, isn't this a perfect example of how we're set up to not be close with the ones we love?
Re: Performer by http://mulberryfairy	23-Aug-03/11:11 AM
Sweet child, interesting experience. LOVE
Re: Performer by http://mulberryfairy	23-Aug-03/11:11 AM
Sweet child, interesting experience. LOVE
Re: summer heat blues by peaceseeker	25-Aug-03/8:32 AM
I'm glad you liked it, it's still a little bit of a "scratchy" one. A "hermaphrodite pickle" is a penis that is so small, the man could be considered a hermaphrodite.
regarding some deleted poem...	27-Aug-03/4:18 PM
Please be gentle, I'm all vulnerable in love.
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Aug-03/8:24 AM
Advice? Should I boycott his hot bar?
Re: Peach (Revision) by http://mulberryfairy	1-Sep-03/2:23 PM
No offense, but is remorselessly a word? One question: are you in love?
Re: Part I: The Peach by http://mulberryfairy	1-Sep-03/2:25 PM
I liked your statement "I guess that was that," but I want to know more. What else were you feeling? Relief that it was over? Not wanting it to be over?
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Sep-03/2:27 PM
Did you feel like you had been "picked clean" - by him or yourself? Was the squirrel a metaphor for something?
Re: Peach (Revision) by http://mulberryfairy	1-Sep-03/2:30 PM
I love the imagery here. I really felt this one. Was the desire to have something delicious all to yourself?
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Sep-03/9:42 AM
OK, then, what can I do to make it better??
Re: Plastic is Forever by http://mulberryfairy	14-Sep-03/8:46 AM
Can you say more about the bruising? I imagine the mention of bruising has more significance than just its physicality on the arm. What are your thoughts on the friend's fervorous grip, and the narrator's bruising?
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Sep-03/5:37 PM
Joe-joe, Joe-joe, you just can't write, Joe-joe, Joe-joe, try as you might. Joe-joe, Joe-joe, you numb Jesus freak, Joe-joe, Joe-joe, you poemranker geek. J-j, J-j, you make no sense, J-j, J-j, you are so dense.
Re: A new beginning by hobojo	16-Sep-03/3:46 PM
I liked the sweating part, but it needs more sex.
Re: Upside down and tigers by horus8	16-Sep-03/3:48 PM
Is it tigers that have forked penises?
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Sep-03/3:51 PM
sounds like there's some guilt behind the pleasure of the apple juice and masturbating, yes?
Re: body image by http://mulberryfairy	27-Sep-03/2:34 PM
It's interesting to me the way you related the suicide to the work-out class. I would like to see more about how the two are similar. Very well written, a perfect 10.