Re: My Boyfriend's Afro Pick by horus8	13-Mar-04/6:18 PM
Atleast your room-mates don't actively rap.. and then turn around to claim "poetry must rhyme" when peaking over you shoulder as you write.. I think I had that stupid arguement with them ten times twenty and back again? But when I stole some of their crappy bland & unoriginal lyrics and made a rhymin parody? Them parrots haven't chirped since. Blessed with ten.
Re: a comment on Life is a Basket of Pennies by SupremeDreamer	13-Mar-04/6:06 PM
yeah, I got it, and that big autographed picture lol. Now girlies keep asking me "Who is THAT?!"... damn you. I've been somewhat anti-social lately.. among other things, which is why I haven't been responding to emails, or even using my computer much till yesterday.
Re: The Prophetical Eye of Dreams by Don-Quixote	15-Feb-04/4:40 PM
This is some quick scrawl that I wrote.. so no, it isn't something I put much effort into-- but I thought it might amuse or interest some.
Re: a comment on American Eden v.2 [revised] by SupremeDreamer	12-Jan-04/6:48 PM
Oh yeah? check out Victory smokes & black tiger ambrosia.. I just posted it fresh from my dream lab. (Been crafting it most of the day.)
Re: a comment on Waiting to inhale (Stardust & God's Black Nostril) by Don-Quixote	7-Jan-04/8:43 PM
soldered? (metal sushi? not sure that fits.. perhaps "melded"?)
Re: a comment on Waiting to inhale (Stardust & God's Black Nostril) by Don-Quixote	7-Jan-04/8:25 PM
er.. missed that.. well, what do you think of the moldered sushi? (ashes.. cremated roadkill?..hrmm.)
Re: a comment on BreakBeat TimeTravel by nentwined	7-Jan-04/9:23 AM
No, you don't have to have a goal, but I figure everything has a purpose- no matter how inane that purpose might be. I had the same goal when I wrote Dance in my Golden Shower. Tis how I broke the writers barrier. coffee = water. But we all know my opinion there..
Re: a comment on BreakBeat TimeTravel by nentwined	7-Jan-04/9:03 AM
Well, its a poetic word.. (well, personally, I think hallmark has ruined it) Hell, you could make a poem by just writing "moments" and nothing else, and have a good chance of getting away with it. heres a contribution to your fascination: moments between golden splashes and amber tears is where peace is found before the dreaded eye sting and the smell of cleanliness. Oh, and heres a 7.. it was funny I think, though I'm guessing that wasn't exactly your goal. :P
Re: a comment on BreakBeat TimeTravel by nentwined	7-Jan-04/8:47 AM
I second that. Because this poem has guaranteed nentwined to face molestation charges from "moments". You know, we could of done this mathematically.. Loop 1sec + 1.
Re: a comment on Waiting to inhale (Stardust & God's Black Nostril) by Don-Quixote	7-Jan-04/8:36 AM
A yellowed snowman!??!?! I shall keep it in my fridge to preserve this honor forever and ever and ever. (Its genuine golden urine right?) Oh religion never loses its comic value, atleast not for me. Not really bitch-slappin em.. well cept for the pope, but hes a little man in a big big cosmic coke machine. I did this piece while thinking "what if I was god? What would i be doing/thinking at this moment? etc" Then stars turned to cocaine and my all-powerful lightbulb pointed me to the light. Hence God V2 "Scarface Edition" Also, I just love it when people say I'm victimizing the simple-minded & faithful... Theres no better feeling than feeling like an asshole to the core.
Re: a comment on Dance in my Golden Shower by SupremeDreamer	7-Jan-04/8:12 AM
Why, thank you :) Hey, whats your take on waiting to inhale?
Re: a comment on Faith by Pervy Elf	7-Jan-04/6:50 AM
Well, sorry for getting your gender wrong.. To that persons ideal of their god? wtf? Every religion/person has their little variations on their "ideal" concerning God... But those two lines, no matter what, is bashing God... Unless the reader in question agree's that God is a lie/fake. And no, you never said you were molested as a child, but fair12 DID claim that.. Perhaps I'm wrong, but this part of your poem clearly relates to faith12, whether you were molested or not: "Well, where was your God when my innocence died? All those years ago. Still a child." I never named what killed your innocence, so I haven't misinterpreted your poem at all. Also, you did deny gods existence in your poem: "Your God was never real!" Look, its obviouse that your playing this VERY safe.. PC Damage control. It doesn't do any good to deny that you bashed god and denied/discredited his existence, specially since the poem proves that you have. The purpose of your poem has no real relation to what you claim: "Contents of this poem are for those who feel that they must push thier beliefs onto others in an attempt to make thier logic appear concrete." Since the poem cleary conveys a personal issue with god. As for constructive criticism? Your poem is beyond help, if you ask me, the only way to improve it? Is to rewrite the entire thing. Do yourself a favor: when you plan to bullshit us? make sure the bullshit makes sense. (Or atleast make it so we can understand that "blab" of yours...) And honestly now? No one is really suffering here.. or atleast I hope no one takes the internet that seriously to the point of suffering when someone makes a blunt comment against their religion. That would definately be reason to consider "getting a life".
Re: Poets who are virgins? listen to Mr. Haiku. by Don-Quixote	28-Nov-03/12:48 AM
Hrmm.. well, I will have to restrain myself from tweaking it another 300 times. Mr. Haiku doesn't allow much room for blabbering- but he did allow two extra haiku's this time, since we are dealing with virgins... and they do need to get laid. Oh, and this is dedicated to McFan.
Re: a comment on Murder means oil for Bush's coffer by DreamerSupreme	24-Nov-03/8:20 PM
Einstein believed in the afterlife? energy does not die; it changes form. Found that to be interesting- his quotes? these ones make me grin: "The only thing that interferes with my learning is my education." "Imagination is more important than knowledge." "Reality is merely an illusion, albeit a very persistent one." "A question that sometimes drives me crazy: am I? or are the others crazy?"
Re: a comment on Trollop: A Married Mans Revenge by DreamerSupreme	24-Nov-03/7:54 PM
I suck at spelling too.. ;/ (infact, h8 got me to misspell transparency twice in a row? then DA used it against me.. memories..) have you ever tried www.spellcheck.net? I use it after inspecting my work by-myself- Actually has helped me to improve my spelling, but meth+typing? another snag all together.
Re: a comment on A "sirius"makeover by The_Third_Isis	24-Nov-03/7:41 PM
h8's music? pretty good.. but his harmonica tunes? a reason to kill. I have read all your poems, voted on them aswell, but didn't comment till this one- not sure why. A writer improves his/her skill always- its constant. (but then again, some others live in denial? or quit poetry and start a 2000 pg. rose-diary) En espanol? anglais, francaise et wallon je comprenez- pas espanol (and im very bad at reading/writing french or walloon.. speaking french? np. walloon? a mouthful to say the least.)
Re: a comment on How to audition for a cereal ad by horus8	24-Nov-03/7:11 PM
aussie friends, thankfully I haven't started using the word "mate". [oh, and oxy-masks then ???? - bastage.. my crumpet is goin bonkers deciphering that comment.]
Re: How to audition for a cereal ad by horus8	24-Nov-03/5:29 PM
Oi.. this is now my favorite haiku- next to the stoner series.
Re: a comment on Heretic Haikus by SupremeDreamer	15-Nov-03/1:06 AM
I think the best one was the last one. cinquain eh? im trying everything nowadays, so sure- i'll probly do it one of these days.
Re: a comment on Memoirs of a Monk II - Sacred Witness by Don-Quixote	15-Nov-03/1:01 AM
if you insist- cred line gone.