Re: a comment on Memoirs of a Monk II - Sacred Witness by Don-Quixote	15-Nov-03/12:56 AM
Slam dunk of the drunken monk, lines written red, wine of purple grape, mouth agape in occult worship and uttering the wise words of loud nothings. ^^ first stanza of the first memoir. quite a difference isnt it? lol.
Re: a comment on Memoirs of a Monk II - Sacred Witness by Don-Quixote	15-Nov-03/12:51 AM
well.. the last one was quite different- and overall "formal yoderspeech + pending doom + reality unveiled + exclamation point, and a catchy signature" now is this about "Piteous punks have we become?" "have we become piteous punks"... choices.. choices.. I'll go againt my gut instinct for once, and toss the yoddle..
Re: a comment on Memoirs of a Monk II - Sacred Witness by Don-Quixote	15-Nov-03/12:28 AM
no worries, ive used the almighty ; a good many times myself. but memory forgets its available at times.. but theres always a way- somehow, someday.
Re: a comment on Memoirs of a Monk II - Sacred Witness by Don-Quixote	15-Nov-03/12:18 AM
-nod- quite good, I should request assistence more often. Accepted! >hands you a spare titanium quill< Im a starving poet, and the cat stole my silver- i snatched the titanium from NASA, neato right? I think so anyway.
Re: a comment on Rockmage, I was going to pay him... by <{Baba^Yaga}>	15-Nov-03/12:13 AM
did you take part in their vodka tradition?
Re: a comment on Rockmage, I was going to pay him... by <{Baba^Yaga}>	15-Nov-03/12:08 AM
Cordless laser mousies are better- you can keep clicking in the bathroom- when you go in the kitchen to get lunch- when your watching tv...... and on and on. Tails are only good to step on. :)
Re: a comment on Memoirs of a Monk II - Sacred Witness by Don-Quixote	15-Nov-03/12:03 AM
Memoirs of a Monk - Saint Screamer is listed under SD if you want to cruise the first one. well.. half sentences.. fuck, sometimes i got so much to say, that punctuation becomes an itch. suggestion? because i hate toying with punctuation when im already slightly handicapped in that department.
Re: a comment on Rockmage, I was going to pay him... by <{Baba^Yaga}>	14-Nov-03/11:54 PM
They molest mouse clickers until they dont work anymore? You got some asian child-labor army too? Do they call themselves the flamin zero deathsquad? and whirl the mousies while crying out "ZEROED BIZNATCH!?!??!??!?" lmao man, think about it, look at what your saying- its punchline hour, really, I could write a free-verse skit with this shit, and get a spot on HBO with chris rock "whiteboy slampoet will be tonights musical guest" (grandmaster flash will be playing the drunken banjo)
Re: a comment on Rockmage, I was going to pay him... by <{Baba^Yaga}>	14-Nov-03/11:41 PM
crusaders never need cash- do they? Just a mouse, right?
Re: Rockmage, I was going to pay him... by <{Baba^Yaga}>	14-Nov-03/11:24 PM
Oki- lets play the seesaw! 10!
Re: a comment on Rockmage, I was going to pay him... by <{Baba^Yaga}>	14-Nov-03/11:23 PM
3500? Damn it, I would have taken that instead of giving 900 zeros anyday, specially since I could never become motivated to zerobomb someone. attention? dood, see his comment on my crappy haiku post- he's on some sort of holy mission me thinks. Some folks take the internet way too seriously, or need to be on a best list.. -shrug- (my only wish is to get a score over 6 one day.. if im so lucky.) well, 900 crap votes aside, shall we toast my fiasco record farewell? Because mr. rock topped it with a super-rocket, and left me choking on the exhaust.
Re: Shadows by tori	27-Oct-03/1:18 AM
4 darks - 5 shadows... etc.. goddamn, this is a pimple man, the repetition amazing - sizzled me into a micro dust particle within seconds. why dont you give it a new title? such as: jiggsaw puzzle. blessed with 4.
Re: My deepest thoughts by poetandknowit	27-Oct-03/12:56 AM
A masterpiece of poo poetry. let it drip. 10.
Re: a comment on The Wrath of Dan Ackroyd by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	6-Oct-03/4:47 PM
Ah.. Well that doesnt make much of a change now does it!- toodles.
Re: a comment on Ravens Flight - Voices of Spite (My First Ever Vilanelle) by Don-Quixote	6-Oct-03/4:43 PM
did you ever think id take a crack at the vil? i didnt, but then i looked in the mirror and i realized that my goatee was getting greasy. maybe i should ponder tackling a sestina next?
Re: a comment on Ravens Flight - Voices of Spite (My First Ever Vilanelle) by Don-Quixote	6-Oct-03/4:32 PM
my inner lawyer was mush when my inner devil proved he could bring about more suffering that he. and the bastards whip cracks 'long with the lawyers groans are soon going to compell me to swipe my universe clean and create less irritating bastages as my underlings.
Re: The Wrath of Dan Ackroyd by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	6-Oct-03/4:28 PM
So, on judgement day you shall deliver unto us a punchline? shucks, all that puffin to say that? waste of wind sir, now my funny bones quiver. heres a 7.
Re: a comment on Ghost of Gloaming by Don-Quixote	6-Oct-03/3:42 PM
i didnt like my ending, but i had nothing else in my bag that felt right.
Re: Trapped in a horseshoe by INTRANSIT	6-Oct-03/3:41 PM
yep, good- but it could use smoothening like ~ said. heres an eight.
Re: a comment on Dress rehearsal by INTRANSIT	6-Oct-03/3:39 PM
"dress rehearsa" i did not title it.. ;P