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Heretic Haikus (Haiku) by SupremeDreamer
[the first set of haikus I've ever written]
Slaves to dead symbols-
but they can decide which ones
they would rather fear.
Righteous and quite proud,
keeping everything hidden-
scared to be naked.
The truth sets you free;
salvation is denial-
so forgive yourself.
Faith: a sad excuse
to be happily naive-
wanting more control
They need to save me-
before I undermine them
while they are timid.
Forgiveness? No way,
I have forgiven myself-
don't need Jesus now!
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.1666665
Weighted score: 5.313765
Overall Rank: 3568
Posted: November 14, 2003 4:49 PM PST; Last modified: November 14, 2003 4:49 PM PST
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try these as cinquain (2/4/6/8/2)
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cinquain eh? im trying everything nowadays, so sure- i'll probly do it one of these days.
do a little research on adelaide crapsey for the scoop on cinquain - good stuff. Here's a good example:
"Triad"
These be
Three silent things:
The falling snow ... the hour
Before the dawn ... the mouth of one
Just dead.