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Poets who are virgins? listen to Mr. Haiku. (Haiku) by Don-Quixote Illusions are fed
with the moot thoughts of grandeur-
Can't fuck with a pen.
So you're a virgin-
trying to score with poems?
keep those lips still.
And do remember
to caress her lips lento-
letting them quiver
Up the ladder:
I Wonder If
Down the ladder:
Are you my love?
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Posted: November 28, 2003 12:40 AM PST; Last modified: November 28, 2003 12:40 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.7019925 Overall Rank: 12005 Comments:
First ones the best, and a nature theme, I mean what could be more natural?
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Mr. Haiku doesn't allow much room for blabbering- but he did allow two extra haiku's this time, since we are dealing with virgins... and they do need to get laid.
Oh, and this is dedicated to McFan.