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Poets who are virgins? listen to Mr. Haiku. (Haiku) by Don-Quixote
Illusions are fed with the moot thoughts of grandeur- Can't fuck with a pen. So you're a virgin- trying to score with poems? keep those lips still. And do remember to caress her lips lento- letting them quiver

Up the ladder: Time
Down the ladder: FREAKIN

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5
Weighted score: 4.7019925
Overall Rank: 12004
Posted: November 28, 2003 12:40 AM PST; Last modified: November 28, 2003 12:40 AM PST
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[n/a] Don-Quixote @ 204.31.168.175 | 28-Nov-03/12:48 AM | Reply
Hrmm.. well, I will have to restrain myself from tweaking it another 300 times.

Mr. Haiku doesn't allow much room for blabbering- but he did allow two extra haiku's this time, since we are dealing with virgins... and they do need to get laid.

Oh, and this is dedicated to McFan.

[8] richa @ 81.178.230.237 | 28-Nov-03/5:00 AM | Reply
First ones the best, and a nature theme, I mean what could be more natural?
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