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Poets who are virgins? listen to Mr. Haiku. (Haiku) by Don-Quixote
Illusions are fed
with the moot thoughts of grandeur-
Can't fuck with a pen.
So you're a virgin-
trying to score with poems?
keep those lips still.
And do remember
to caress her lips lento-
letting them quiver
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.5
Weighted score: 4.7019925
Overall Rank: 12004
Posted: November 28, 2003 12:40 AM PST; Last modified: November 28, 2003 12:40 AM PST
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Mr. Haiku doesn't allow much room for blabbering- but he did allow two extra haiku's this time, since we are dealing with virgins... and they do need to get laid.
Oh, and this is dedicated to McFan.