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Poets who are virgins? listen to Mr. Haiku.

Member since 2003 · Posted 28 Nov 2003 · 2 comments

Illusions are fed with the moot thoughts of grandeur- Can't fuck with a pen. So you're a virgin- trying to score with poems? keep those lips still. And do remember to caress her lips lento- letting them quiver

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[n/a] Don-Quixote 28-Nov-03/12:48 AM Reply

Hrmm.. well, I will have to restrain myself from tweaking it another 300 times.

Mr. Haiku doesn't allow much room for blabbering- but he did allow two extra haiku's this time, since we are dealing with virgins... and they do need to get laid.

Oh, and this is dedicated to McFan.

[8] richa 28-Nov-03/5:00 AM Reply

First ones the best, and a nature theme, I mean what could be more natural?