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Poets who are virgins? listen to Mr. Haiku. (Haiku) by Don-Quixote

Illusions are fed with the moot thoughts of grandeur- Can't fuck with a pen. So you're a virgin- trying to score with poems? keep those lips still. And do remember to caress her lips lento- letting them quiver

Don-Quixote 28-Nov-03/12:48 AM
Hrmm.. well, I will have to restrain myself from tweaking it another 300 times.

Mr. Haiku doesn't allow much room for blabbering- but he did allow two extra haiku's this time, since we are dealing with virgins... and they do need to get laid.

Oh, and this is dedicated to McFan.





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