| Re: a comment on Sex on bugs by LuckyJoe |
4-Aug-03/8:48 AM |
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Not so much the use of profanity but over use. I have a bad itch about over use of profanity. Mainly because over using profanity takes away anything intellegent contained in the sentance. Had he said "That fucking sucked." Wouldn't have been any big deal... but every other word was a cuss word... hard to take anyone serious with a vocab like that. Even if they're mad and yelling at you wanting to kick your ass. All I can seem to do is laugh when people talk like that.
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| Re: a comment on Sex on bugs by LuckyJoe |
4-Aug-03/6:55 AM |
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Thanks for the vote and the comment. The comment was that of humor and thats what the poem was supposed to be. Just something totally off the wall compared to my norm :)
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| Re: a comment on Sex on bugs by LuckyJoe |
4-Aug-03/6:53 AM |
Nice comment thanks for the humor :)
Have a good day.
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| Re: a comment on Sex on bugs by LuckyJoe |
4-Aug-03/6:52 AM |
You may have thought that it was total shit... hey what ever flips your skirt. But one, refrain from using profanity please. I've not sworn at you; so you have no reason to swear at me. Two treat others as you wish to be treated (if you wrote something that was total shit I would reply saying to try something different because what you just needed some help). Three I'm going to laugh at you and your remark both now. Remarks from people like you are worth about as much as a toilet bowl filled with feces... lots of crap.
Just because one poem wrote by a person doesn't quit your tastes and or likings doesn't mean everything they write is going to be the same. But I understand you have a fetish of sounding all big and bad while stroking your joke behind your computer screen. Rock on, what ever gets you off. More power to the pimples that act up like yourself needing popped. Nothing is more tasteless than that of puss filled membranes.
Thanks for your comment... have a nice day may your fetish filled strokes give you great pleasure at the expense of others.
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| Re: a comment on Oxywarmonger by poetandknowit |
1-Aug-03/9:50 AM |
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So then everyone around you writes like hardened criminals that may never again get to see light of day?
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| Re: Oxywarmonger by poetandknowit |
1-Aug-03/8:47 AM |
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Interesting poem... but after reading the comments... if its not a war poem or an anti-war poem... umm what is it? *confused as normal*
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| Re: a comment on Oxywarmonger by poetandknowit |
1-Aug-03/8:44 AM |
Do you only wear the cat suit when you feel the need to write? Gives you super powers to write better than anyone else? :) hehe
Sorry the cat suit got me interested... but please no claws...
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| Re: One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined |
28-Jul-03/6:29 PM |
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Nice poem... gives a message but also stays hid. I like poems that can't be fully understood leaving the reader room to fill in the gaps as the see fit... thats how some of the best poetry ever written has been. Keep up the good work and keep on writing.
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| Re: As the Redwood Ages by DurtKL |
28-Jul-03/6:27 PM |
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Nice... not sure the whole meaning of the poem... but do we the readers truely have to understand to still enjoy poetry? Keep up the work and keep on writing.
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| Re: I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike |
28-Jul-03/6:25 PM |
Everyone does start small... even after writing years and years its nice to go back to the roots and see if the simplisity (spelling) is still there. Often times its hard to get back to your roots. My first poem I ever wrote was back in 4th grade... short...sweet...simple. Here it is...
May we never depart,
May the love always stay true.
Shall it not stay,
Can destiny discover that we were made for each other?
May life lead us the right way.
Please hold on.
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| Re: wandering, north by <~> |
26-Jul-03/5:31 PM |
nice poem... makes a person think... thats what writing is all about.
Keep on writing because those of us the feeling and those of us that refuse to feel are the ones that have created language.
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| Re: To Lesley by Bahookie |
26-Jul-03/5:28 PM |
Holding a persons heart in your hand, caring only about them? Don't care about yourself because your obsession lies within and upon them? The feel of their skin makes your hands burn sensually?
Short and sweet... nothing wrong with that. Thought I'd let you know what I got from your poem... see if I was right in how I read into it. If not I'd like to know what it was that you were thinking with your words.
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| Re: Those Crazy's people in my brainsky by Shardik |
26-Jul-03/5:22 PM |
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I'm confused... but you made me laugh so all the better. Skipped from one thing to another.. but if you were trying to make the reader laugh and be confused you've managed... nice job.
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| Re: Anouk by daniella |
25-Jul-03/4:13 AM |
Interesting metaphore... but it works... thats what poetry is all about... making that which often doesn't work find a way to work.
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| Re: Her Sleeping Form by JoyLuck |
23-Jul-03/10:10 AM |
You set my heart on an ending that would compliment the beginning and that I didn't get. Being mislead or supprised by verse doesn't do anything for me. Had I not set my mind to how I wanted it ended I'm sure it would have been great. Not knocking your work by any means it was still good.
Keep on writing, as a fellow poet I can speak for us all saying we like seeing others ideals to widen our own.
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| Re: Perversions 5: Kink vs. Mothra by razorgrin |
23-Jul-03/10:06 AM |
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