| Re: Blind Faith by NNirvana13666 |
5-Sep-03/4:44 PM |
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Me neither. You and "electroman1979" might have a disagreement to talk about- see "Judgment Day".
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| Re: a comment on Memoirs II by http://mulberryfairy |
5-Sep-03/4:17 PM |
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That comment wasn't from me, "mulberryfairy", it was from Jeremi B. Handrinos, who was having a bad day. I am rarely verbally abusive toward someone offering compliments.
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| Re: a comment on The Waiting Room by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
4-Sep-03/7:15 PM |
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Are you serious? You mean, "If people believe in (Islam) in (their) hearts then it is true (?) for them. Are you just blinded by (your) own arrogance?" I am sure that this poem is intended to be silly and offensive- DA is talented in making people who stand up for the "right" thing look ridiculous (see your above typos, which I hope were intended to push on the comedic plot that exists in DA's comment sections).
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| Re: Outliving the Alphabet (say goodbye to abecedarian) by Retaliate |
4-Sep-03/6:53 PM |
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Top of the list for my unhairy hairyness, take that poetandknowit! But even the compliment isn't going to get you a 10 when you are saying goodbye, abecedarian.
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| Re: a comment on Memoirs II by http://mulberryfairy |
4-Sep-03/6:45 PM |
Are you serious about the forced fiction part? I thought from the comments and the title that you'd know that it was a completely true story- nothing's been added, seriously (though I did leave out the part where the snow melt leaked into her boot and I had to carry her 50 pound self around for an hour while she complained about being cold).
You (or one of your personas) liked the other memoir about my daughter that I put on here, a while back, the story about the drunken harmonica player on the city bus. This poem isn't about a guilt trip, it is about me appreciating my daughter, and I believe that some other people appreciated hearing about her innocence. It is not about a guilt trip, I march based on my conscience- and my conscience covers a lot. Name a more important thing and I promise, if it appealed to my conscience the way it did yours, I was there marching, or going door to door educating, or doing whatever I could do about it (barring monetary contributions). Thanks for your bold comments, if it weren't for your complaints, I wouldn't have known this ever made it in the top 20, though I totally agree with the reason it is(temporarily) #1, people are afraid to give it a low vote, even though their votes are anonymous, because they don't want to seem prejudiced or racist. But I know it is neither best on poemranker or my best work, in case you thought I'd get a big head over it.
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| Re: I'm going back to art school by TanHand |
2-Sep-03/11:01 AM |
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You did architecture studios twice. You are right about the acceptance level at art school, I used to work at "MECA" with my hairy legs.
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| Re: Restraint by Retaliate |
2-Sep-03/10:52 AM |
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"Yuki" indeed! At least my narrator did it in the car. Be considerate, you snake. But you did provoke some nostalgia for me, you know, the good old days of having sex in college dormrooms while roommates "sleep".
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| Re: justly now included by A. Nomaly |
2-Sep-03/10:45 AM |
Abuelita? Little grandmother?
I like your style.
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| Re: Happy 29. a little late by A. Nomaly |
2-Sep-03/10:43 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Peach (Revision) by http://mulberryfairy |
2-Sep-03/10:37 AM |
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As a matter of fact, in terms of genetics and agriculture, the word peach is often used interchangeably with nectarine because the only differences are the smooth versus fuzzy skin, the nectarine's darker color, and the stronger flavor. Metaphor that non-fiction!
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| Re: a comment on Peach (Revision) by http://mulberryfairy |
2-Sep-03/10:34 AM |
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No offense, but unlike yourself, I know the difference between sex and love- and here, the poem is definitely more about sex than love- which is not to say that there is no loving sentiment toward the other adulterer on the part of the narrator.
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| Re: a comment on Part I: The Peach by http://mulberryfairy |
2-Sep-03/10:24 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Peach (Revision) by http://mulberryfairy |
1-Sep-03/6:42 PM |
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To have the something "delicious" to oneself, and to keep the naughty secret.
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| Re: a comment on Peach (Revision) by http://mulberryfairy |
1-Sep-03/6:41 PM |
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Yeah, the narrator probably is in love by your standards (I love you/I hate you Mr. Vegan Chef man).
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| Re: A Cacodemon's Sermon: Message to a Eudemon by Y2kSlamPoet |
1-Sep-03/11:38 AM |
This is my favorite part: "The love of pure killing
incites me to rush
in close, to enjoy
the feel of skin
quickly turned
into dark colors. "
Nice, but could use a few apostrophes.
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| Re: a comment on Peach (Revision) by http://mulberryfairy |
1-Sep-03/11:33 AM |
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You are like one of those beefy personal trainers shouting "No pain No gain" at their trainees. (I mean this in the most affectionate way possible). Anyway, it is Labor Day, and I am lazy, so I will not be adding passion or energy to this poem today.
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| Re: a comment on True Respect (A Distant Adoration) by abecedarian |
1-Sep-03/10:26 AM |
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That is a nice theory, until I change my mind about it.
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| Re: a comment on Peach (Revision) by http://mulberryfairy |
1-Sep-03/10:23 AM |
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I think the "guilt" you detect is more like the narrator's awareness that she SHOULD feel guilty- she knows she's selfish, but she is happy about her choices.
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| Re: a comment on Peach (Revision) by http://mulberryfairy |
1-Sep-03/10:21 AM |
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Yeah, I know. I just split it up because I figured it was too long to get anyone to read it in its original form- but those breaks sort of presented themselves. Anyhow, I am feeling a little too romantic (high) to come up with any quality poetry today.
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| Re: Ohio's Dirty Natives by Fear of Garbage |
1-Sep-03/9:07 AM |
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Awesome. I liked the repetition and the flow of the poem and the precise descriptions.
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