Re: a comment on The empty room by INTRANSIT	3-Sep-03/5:42 AM
oh yeah, "nobody comes" should be: nobody stays. because you did go there.. but were sent away... z mentioned that.. bleh.
Re: The empty room by INTRANSIT	3-Sep-03/5:40 AM
short and simple. i also think the inversion suggestion should be utilized. though, im not sure about the message.. my first thought is: "god does not forgive. he is also sadistic, and left jesus in heaven alone." anyway, heres a 7.
Re: R.O.X. by InvertedEar	3-Sep-03/5:36 AM
Hrmm. blessed with 7. Do you only write erotic poetry btw?
Re: When He's In Me by J.B. Manning	3-Sep-03/5:29 AM
nice revised edition. 9.
Re: a comment on Undefined Infinity by InvertedEar	3-Sep-03/5:24 AM
i learned the hard way to spellcheck and read over my work before posting. so i posted alot of poems with bad spelling, grammar, and wierd sentences. many poets came and used this to punch me in the face a few times. Evolving, i donned an iron mask. But i still get pains when i chew my food now and then.
Re: a comment on Ashes to Ashes by Irischer Junge	3-Sep-03/4:17 AM
Dark-Angel Quote: "If you really do not care what anyone thinks about your poem, then why have you posted it on a website where people rate poetry?" yeah, iris. WHY? i say it when im just avoiding things or just answering in a need to chirp. You seem dead serious. tsk. that doesnt look good, really man. ;)
Re: White Veil by J.B. Manning	3-Sep-03/4:13 AM
um.. ok.. some things here are included to add that "wow.." which doesnt make me go "wow..". 6.
Re: a comment on There are only wolves, and sheep, and moon dance by Jeremi B. Handrinos	3-Sep-03/3:22 AM
yeah.. i have memories of my mother asking me if i see those spirits behind me. -i turn around- what are you saying mamman? theres one behind you, theres another siting right beside you as well.. you cant see them? No. I can.
Re: There are only wolves, and sheep, and moon dance by Jeremi B. Handrinos	3-Sep-03/3:08 AM
hrmm.. ok, i get it now, but a question: is the confusing jibber here and there the mental breakdown of the mans mind as he goes through the process of death? ex: We are yes we are are we yes blessed with 8.
Re: a comment on There are only wolves, and sheep, and moon dance by Jeremi B. Handrinos	3-Sep-03/3:02 AM
Ah, alrighty.
Re: a comment on There are only wolves, and sheep, and moon dance by Jeremi B. Handrinos	3-Sep-03/2:33 AM
the poem. i dont get it. thats all. then again, you and i both know about my drafty cranium, so i guess im not saying anything really.
Re: There are only wolves, and sheep, and moon dance by Jeremi B. Handrinos	3-Sep-03/2:20 AM
Um.. well, im left thinking "durr.. huh?"
Re: Undefined Infinity by InvertedEar	3-Sep-03/1:01 AM
"I knew we both wished this photograph lasts to eternity" huh? maybe this would work better: I knew we wished this photograph to last an eternity. hrmm? dont you think this makes more sense? overall, i like this, but its a rough draft in my opinion, it needs to be ironed out. Blessed with 8.
Re: a comment on Sugar Daddy (Free Curse) by Pystal Cocaine swifter than You. by Bachus	3-Sep-03/12:29 AM
let me guess, you figure that childbirth is a holy subject, and no matter how badly a poet writes about childbirth it is a sin to make fun of poems with such a topic? yes, ofcourse, and you also believe any poet who does make fun of those bad poems are evil men that must not have high ratings since that wouldnt be right. you are a spineless turd, that must be brutally beaten with a nine iron, then displayed publicly on an upside down cross, with your back facing the crowd, your ass stuffed with a snake.
Re: a comment on Sugar Daddy (Free Curse) by Pystal Cocaine swifter than You. by Bachus	3-Sep-03/12:21 AM
because she must defend anything that has the corny emotional goo that society loves. she will suck your dick if you say you'll let up on crushing this bad dilutation of art, so go ahead and enjoy yourself, and make sure to be cruel in doubling the pressure of your blows afterwards.
Re: a comment on Sugar Daddy (Free Curse) by Pystal Cocaine swifter than You. by Bachus	3-Sep-03/12:18 AM
you have no concept of how a parody should be made. a parody should exaggerate the weakness of the poem it makes fun of, and must include humor that borders and even crosses the line that seperates good and nasty. your not fit to judge this sort of writing, since you have no understanding of this particular sort of satire. (i really like my "uppity official mask", you like it? im still ironing out the wrinkles)
Re: Sugar Daddy (Free Curse) by Pystal Cocaine swifter than You. by Bachus	3-Sep-03/12:14 AM
good parody, made it as nonsensical as crystals poem, but unlike hers, it had class and humor, making it worth a million daddy -pregnancy- poems loaded with Van goo labeled with the trademark company name "Emo Slushy" advertised daily with the nice catch phrase "Mush is good when you have no teeth!" made fun of by oversexed teenagers snickering "toothless mouths are better suited to suck drooling snakes" not many true barbarians like you exist my friend, but quantity is not needed with all the vicious brutality you posses. Blessed with 10.
Re: Voting on PoemRanker by LuckyJoe	1-Sep-03/1:06 PM
genius.. kiddo, your poetry does not look like the work of brilliance, and weed certainly wont help.
Re: a comment on goofy poem to prove I'm not morbid (Ode to an Onion) by greym0on	1-Sep-03/12:20 PM
;/ if i start kissing a girlie and the taste of onion appears, my lips are likely to scruntch up in repulsion (and a bad attempt will be made to avoid looking like an insensitive bastard) PLUMS!!! PLUMS!!! purple plums.. sweet, good on breath, your lovers lips will thank you for it!!!!
Re: a comment on Peach (Revision) by http://mulberryfairy	1-Sep-03/12:15 PM
blasphemy!!!!! AHHH! bah, oki doki, just do it at one point or another. damn it.