on Boy's Hell by shadowaura
4 Sep 2003, 7:06 PM
weep, why? for there is knives a plenty. 8.
on Outliving the Alphabet (say goodbye to abecedarian) by Retaliate
4 Sep 2003, 6:18 PM
Aww.. cmon now, you know i just do the meth to piss darkie off. Have a fun trip, and Happy Birthday!! :)
replying on Pray For Cum By JesusFreak (parody of CLS's pray for help) by DreamerSupreme
4 Sep 2003, 6:07 PM
because, havent you heard: im a sick bastard. I also have little else to do to occupy my time.
replying on The Banishment of Don Quixote by abecedarian
4 Sep 2003, 12:40 AM
"Mob mentality" I suffer a extreme liking to the use of sarcasm. exaggeration, frustration, etc.. text offers many faces, im just a mask in constant remolding.
Plus, you got the point finally. no need to crack open yer skull and extract the holy secrets. ;P
Plus, you got the point finally. no need to crack open yer skull and extract the holy secrets. ;P
replying on The Banishment of Don Quixote by abecedarian
4 Sep 2003, 12:35 AM
drunk, two nights ago. i spray painted some expensive cars. last fuck was 3 weeks ago.. swimming, well, i tried to drown myself in a bucket yesterday.
No worries though, my "mob solution" has been tossed for a more stubborn, persistent approach, that slowly, but surely, slammed my point through.
I dont mind that he wants to make me think.. i just mind when folks become so brave and then do not wish to go the distance, resigning themselves to calm defense, i get all.. qwerky..
in other words, if its labeled "Coke" and i suddenly get "pepsi" the checkout clerk will suffer. oh well. its in the past now.
No worries though, my "mob solution" has been tossed for a more stubborn, persistent approach, that slowly, but surely, slammed my point through.
I dont mind that he wants to make me think.. i just mind when folks become so brave and then do not wish to go the distance, resigning themselves to calm defense, i get all.. qwerky..
in other words, if its labeled "Coke" and i suddenly get "pepsi" the checkout clerk will suffer. oh well. its in the past now.
replying on Pray For Cum By JesusFreak (parody of CLS's pray for help) by DreamerSupreme
3 Sep 2003, 11:55 PM
-Bows- well, i never claimed to be nice, nor without perversion. I dont think that even darkie can find a reference to me saying that, and he has a well kept journal of what i do/say.
rot in hell? let me guess, your christian.. ? well, fuck you, your theistical god, your worthless heaven, and your gay pitchfork devil hell.
and get a sense of humor you lil shit.
rot in hell? let me guess, your christian.. ? well, fuck you, your theistical god, your worthless heaven, and your gay pitchfork devil hell.
and get a sense of humor you lil shit.
replying on Pray For Cum By JesusFreak (parody of CLS's pray for help) by DreamerSupreme
3 Sep 2003, 1:28 PM
heh. have you seen the original from crystal lane swift?
"praying for help" or pray for help.
its a hoot. sorry about no vote on your latest, i do enjoy the other work you have done though.
"praying for help" or pray for help.
its a hoot. sorry about no vote on your latest, i do enjoy the other work you have done though.
replying on The One and Only by J.B. Manning
3 Sep 2003, 1:23 PM
well, i didnt find it worth rating. no offense and all, just my opinion.
replying on goofy poem to prove I'm not morbid (Ode to an Onion) by greym0on
3 Sep 2003, 1:20 PM
that why im advertising them z.. i didnt say they have plums.. thats why i want to make money selling it.. just where did you see me saying they have plums? did you have a short circuit?
on The One and Only by J.B. Manning
3 Sep 2003, 1:02 PM
ok. thats cool.
replying on #2 Entry from Chico, a stalker on Pico, Jason Bigg's lobster by <{Baba^Yaga}>
3 Sep 2003, 7:35 AM
well, cmon now, chico just has some gears that suffer reverse rotation and need a serious amount of grease.
replying on R.O.X. by InvertedEar
3 Sep 2003, 7:32 AM
No eye has ever dived into the sea of my emotion
penetration... i mean, if its not erotic, you sure got me all confused with this type of writing. that or im just an oversexed bastard.
penetration... i mean, if its not erotic, you sure got me all confused with this type of writing. that or im just an oversexed bastard.
replying on R.O.X. by InvertedEar
3 Sep 2003, 7:31 AM
with the language you used, yes. subtle in nature.
ex: And weâll draw and weave colors as we lay in bed..
gets me thinking of bed wrestling, skin blushing in arousal, rainbow hallucinations from orgasm.. shit like that.
-shrug- what were you attempting to do with this poem then?
ex: And weâll draw and weave colors as we lay in bed..
gets me thinking of bed wrestling, skin blushing in arousal, rainbow hallucinations from orgasm.. shit like that.
-shrug- what were you attempting to do with this poem then?
on Bury Me at Dead Man's Point by EAger to Offend
3 Sep 2003, 7:27 AM
Well.. kinda lost me someplaces, then took hold of me again.. 7.
on The Waiting Room by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
3 Sep 2003, 7:06 AM
cute. nice ascii crosses.. i bet settle is going to do one with jesus on it, bleeding and all that in response.
Did your church pat you on the back for reciting this poem? did you manage not to have a random bowel movement and get all red in the face because no one likes lethal gas being expelled in a place of holy worship, nor brown gravy dripping on the altar?
--end of jokes meant to insult--
overall 7. consult settle for better ascii crosses.
Did your church pat you on the back for reciting this poem? did you manage not to have a random bowel movement and get all red in the face because no one likes lethal gas being expelled in a place of holy worship, nor brown gravy dripping on the altar?
--end of jokes meant to insult--
overall 7. consult settle for better ascii crosses.
on hip hap pap by Garrett S Sexton
3 Sep 2003, 6:20 AM
... did he pinch your cock with his teeth? ow.. tsk.. sexton, sometimes you post poems i like, other times, you just get me wondering if you were droped alot when your were a baby. but thats ok. 3
replying on The Banishment of Don Quixote by abecedarian
3 Sep 2003, 5:52 AM
a drop of water doesnt relieve most peoples thirst.
replying on The Banishment of Don Quixote by abecedarian
3 Sep 2003, 5:51 AM
do you see that the value is covered by many bells and whistles?
replying on The Banishment of Don Quixote by abecedarian
3 Sep 2003, 5:50 AM
Your persistent in saying the message is clear.. it isnt. its fuzzy. damn it, i told you! im not alone.
And you must work more intensely if you want your poems to be called "didactic" or worthy of being considered something that teaches. I DEMAND ELBOW GREASE!
Teachers are sposed to make things clear, or atleast get the students to think.
I think writing to teach is not easy to do, because we arent talking about science or math with direct facts, etc. We are talking opinion, metaphysics, philosophy, etc, which do not have direct concrete -FACTS-.. a better goal is to make people THINK, and to write poems with a subtle direction considering what the reader will ponder about.
but thats just my opinion.
And you must work more intensely if you want your poems to be called "didactic" or worthy of being considered something that teaches. I DEMAND ELBOW GREASE!
Teachers are sposed to make things clear, or atleast get the students to think.
I think writing to teach is not easy to do, because we arent talking about science or math with direct facts, etc. We are talking opinion, metaphysics, philosophy, etc, which do not have direct concrete -FACTS-.. a better goal is to make people THINK, and to write poems with a subtle direction considering what the reader will ponder about.
but thats just my opinion.