Re: Why I’m Homeless by Dovina	19-Feb-07/5:55 PM
What image are you going for? Where is the image? That's all.
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Feb-07/5:57 PM
Yes rockmage, embrace the darkside, enjoy it's cold return. ARHARHAR, me cullies.
Re: Plurals by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	19-Feb-07/6:00 PM
wtf?
Re: Here are the wipes by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	19-Feb-07/6:01 PM
Topnotch sir.
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Feb-07/6:05 PM
The lines: Loving the grass delighting my bare soles, & In the grey on grey of false dawns. desperately needs reconsideration. You need to redo the beginning really. Six.
Re: Polite refusal by Stephen Robins	19-Feb-07/6:11 PM
I'm going to print this out and burn it outside the steps of the college I end up attending after my pilgrimage through the wastelands of american existence. That aside, have a ten, you cad.
Re: looking for by Phalkon	23-Feb-07/3:51 PM
Four.
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Apr-07/3:33 PM
RockMage, this is a sad attack. Could you not attempt something better? This certainly is not kosher. Plus it's evident that he can write, simply perview his postings; there used to be more than what is shown now by the way, until he decided to delete a large portion of it... but in any case, whatever angle you attempt, it will have little or no effect. Belittling him, in essence, is simply the act of belittling yourself. But, by all means, do what you feel necessary.
Re: Easter (edited) by thetrev	22-Apr-07/5:28 PM
morassed-- Were you trying to turn a noun into an adjective? Webster didn't provide a listing, other than for "morass", if that was what you meant. That, or Webster sucks ass. That aside, I enjoyed it. Nine.
Re: Ein Kampf by Sasha	22-Apr-07/5:38 PM
You need a better, more original approach to this. That and.. oh yeah, the nazi/holocaust poem is over done to the extreme. Another thing: Unless you actually lived and endured that rather grim period as a Jew in Germany, I find all artistic expression dressed thus to be abortive. Horridly fruitless rather...
Re: Pink BAlls by EAger to Offend	22-Apr-07/5:40 PM
Amusing. ;]
Re: What it Feels Like by laurahenn2010	22-Apr-07/5:43 PM
Ahh... now I know love is all great, transcending every thing around it, despite it's tendency to rouse so many fucking cliches... But this poem isn't. This could be anyone. I see nothing. You gave me a clouded reflection of the idealized sensations. Ultimately? I feel horridly cheated. Zero.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Apr-07/5:54 PM
Pointless? Hrmm. Consider the life of an old man creating odd little statues, the last farts of expression sacrificed to the memory of hippies turned Gandalf and sour on rankerville rivalries made senile from the charm that emanates from his crumbling chess pieces... ahh and his time slips by... and time is what was yesterday, old boy. Checkmate. Also, this whole approach? Rather sad... Is that the best you can come up with? As if your life sir, is anymore meaningful. It isn't. I, you, everyone, have no meaning other than what we place within the frame of personal existence. Your sad attack? Ultimately pointless. Oh, and the last time I checked your picture... you could probably make some money holding a sign off the side of an offramp. Give you a pint of Jack and you'd fit right in with the Old burnouts. :)
Re: Ation by bwaha	23-Apr-07/8:06 PM
stairs- stares. Unless there's some sort of pun intended. That aside, I think you shouldn't have tried to make this a lyric. But, there is a lot of interesting segments in this that kindles my interest, like stanza one, three, and the refrain(s). It also reminds of how I used "ation" in most of my last post.. though I hadn't contrived it.. nevermind that, I'm woolgathering. Anyway, I give it a six over-all.
Re: The Death of Us by andrewjthomas	24-Apr-07/3:47 PM
I think the last stanza was an exellent cherry to this cake. Nine.
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Apr-07/3:55 PM
He needs to start selling the good stuff then... or make better bongs. Now, what was the point here? Just wondering.
Re: ONLY POETRY IS FOREVER by daggatolar	24-Apr-07/4:26 PM
Poetry is certainly NOT forever. It is temporary, like the words and images imployed in its form. Meanings distort and crumble with time, fading like a cracked picture, till most no longer even remember... Then it Dies, and another poet makes a new structure. No vote.
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Apr-07/2:21 PM
Can you not find something better to do? Jeezus H. Christ old boy! This simply shows a lack of talent. You make attacks, the attacks are ultimately childish. You can not even muster enough intellect to form a parody. What is wrong with you? Is it vindictive senility? Probably. I agree with the Half-Italian, the title should be renamed Rockmage. Then and only then will I give a vote of ten. No Vote.
Re: The Lover and The Rapist by Skamper	18-Jun-07/7:02 PM
"make all your birthday wishes – true" why didn't you inlude COME? Speak it out loud, tell me what beat is missing? Check This: make all your birthday wishes cum true while I push my fingers deeper into you --- Do you get what I'm saying? That aside, here's a nine.
Re: Stark St. Blues. by SupremeDreamer	27-Jul-07/1:08 PM
Note: since this is not a haiku in the traditional sense, without natural imagery, its only haiku attribute being the 5-7-5 syllable format, I decided to dub it a "Faiku". In other words: Don't bother telling me this "Haiku" doesn't follow rigid tradition. I am fully fucking aware of the fact.