regarding some deleted poem...	16-May-06/1:01 PM
Well, you came back from the dead! Plan to zero bomb the entire rankerdome again? ;)
Re: Send The Devil... by horus8	22-Nov-06/11:10 AM
Alas, it is good... I haven't spoken to you in awhile horus. I've finally gotten round to reading Manly P Halls book, and a curiosity holds me- Are you a mason? This question feels stupid, then again, it's better to get stupidities out of the way. Aside from that, how are you doing you fuckin bastard? My new email is sdreamer2234@yahoo.com - maybe I'll hear from you soon. Peace. And heres a ten, though we both know it means nothing.
Re: Celebrity by horus8	24-Nov-06/11:32 AM
Here here! Indeed. May want to check some spelling & grammar, but that aside, it makes me shiver with fear and orgasm.
Re: OI! The Brown Flame by SupremeDreamer	29-Nov-06/10:53 AM
Boredome and Ignorance. Alas I'm held captive.
Re: SNOGGO's Adolescent Adventure in Sidmouth by Edna Sweetlove	13-Dec-06/8:56 AM
Oh snoggo... such an emotional moron. C'mon now, getting paid to shag monroe ain't bad.
Re: Edna's Christmas Farewell by Edna Sweetlove	4-Jan-07/10:03 AM
Just shoot yourself already woman.
Re: Hello Rockmage!! by SupremeDreamer	16-Jan-07/7:09 PM
Zero this bitch. har har har. Savvy?
regarding some deleted poem...	31-Jan-07/9:50 AM
Dood, is this a parody waiting to happen? A title already formed in my head man: "Walking in the Dark" Plus you know this is so fake. Who the fuck fishes for dinner at the park? What park would this be? Not even homeless people fish out of the park river here in San Jose, and I should know, I'm homeless. That aside, everything is cliche to the max. I'll give you a one for the attempt though. :P
regarding some deleted poem...	31-Jan-07/9:52 AM
And yes, I suck at math. Blow me.
Re: Controlled Euthanasia by Dovina	31-Jan-07/9:59 AM
I pressed in the plunger and ran to the john afraid but not sorry it had to be done Ok, say this out loud to yourself. Notice anything? I do. John doesn't ryhme with done. Perhaps Don, but not done. That aside, I bless you with an eight.
Re: Let's praise great Britannia's golden days of now and then by Edna Sweetlove	3-Feb-07/12:28 PM
So, Edna, who is the anonymous admirer? That's what I'd like to know. And as for sweet, you appear quite bitter, M'lady. Lack of love perhaps? Or an overabundance of self-love? Lack-a-day! Who can say? Still it perplexes me.
Re: Cupid Missed Two Junkies (slightly clearer, rambling draft) by Ranger	8-Feb-07/3:54 PM
This needs a bit of consideration, and more defined shaping of the scene. While the title presupposes the theme, it as it stands now is a little confusing to me; basically, I'm wondering if you have a pretty good image & mental snapshot of the of this man, posed in that odd bodily articulation assumed just before & during the coveted arrival of deathly-bliss; the opiate rushing of the soul towards oblivion... Or if he just discovered that it was laced with acid and had a sporadic thought, or image, of enhancing the coming madness with the consumtion of an bloody orange. In short, I'd be happy to see this piece recieve some sharper definition. The image and thought this poem grasps for is worth perfecting. Till then, mate, heres a seven.
Re: self-suffocation by Phalkon	9-Feb-07/12:40 PM
"i tendons tear apart" Eh? What in holy fuck is with the I? Is it a disease? Did you somehow fool yourself into thinking it was necessary, like you convinced yourself that sharing this pimple-lyric to the world was a brilliant undertaking? Allow me to compact this whole thing, though I can not preserve its claim to being a lyric in the process: Silly emotions have flooded my hormone filled head so much that I now wish to be very very dead; but my grip on the .36 is slipping due to my tears, hampering my attempt to fill my cranium with lead-- so instead, I'll wail till blood comes out y'ears in the form of a bad lyric you'll wish y'never read. Not bad eh? In fact, I think I'll post this. Oh, and heres a resounding zero. Do us all a favor, smoke some weed, and find something that inspires better creativity... OK? Or slit your wrists, you know, whatever works.
Re: Ode to a Pimple-Lyric Spawned by Phalkon's Greasy Face. by SupremeDreamer	9-Feb-07/12:50 PM
Er, ehem, could this be considered an improper limerick? I know it doesn't fit the particular rhyme scheme and such.. ah, fuck it, whatever.
Re: a days journey by donmiguel1960	9-Feb-07/1:18 PM
I'm groping frantically for a solemn place to escape the foul flatulent winds howling from your asshole. It's better not to try grasping what isn't there, rather than seizing the flatulence wafting through your cranium's stale, hollow, and oxygen-deprived air.
Re: Captured by Dovina	10-Feb-07/1:58 PM
You know, there are men who posses soft hands. And why use the finger when sex toys are readily available AND well designed for their purpose? But anyway, that aside, I like this. Well executed. Blessed with nine.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Feb-07/2:03 PM
You have jaguars in your veranda? This has the feel of an acid trip in that case. The last line is limp.. I say cut it off. Oh, I also suggest some other title, unless you reside in the middle of the amazonian jungle. Eight.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Feb-07/2:24 PM
First stanza warrants a six. Second stanza, due to being bloated by verbosity, a two. Third stanza could have sufficed to express the entire posting, thus I'm obliged to bless it with ten!!
Re: Ode to a Pimple-Lyric Spawned by Phalkon's Greasy Face. by SupremeDreamer	10-Feb-07/4:06 PM
Just a question concerning the verse, would any one agree that it would be better if I changed it from "so much that I now wish to be very very dead;" to "so much so, that now I wish to be very very dead;" ? Opinions everyone?
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Feb-07/4:30 PM
Purr, it is bad taste to vote for yourself anonymously. Therefor I must retract my previous vote of ten, and subsequently profer a zero.