Re: pissed off pretentious prat by keatsImnot	13-Sep-02/3:35 PM
know whatcha mean .... us poets eh ? how special we are ! ... 4
Re: A Man Of The World by vulcan	14-Sep-02/12:58 AM
:-) ..... 5
Re: Remember-me (an ode to those dropped off at the clinic) by Bachus	14-Sep-02/12:45 AM
;-D for the ps . no vote
Re: Babys Got Blue Eyes by w~* ATHENA *~w	14-Sep-02/12:12 AM
:-) ...... 4
regarding some deleted poem...	14-Sep-02/12:39 AM
no comment and impossible to vote .... i'll just shut up .
regarding some deleted poem...	14-Sep-02/12:42 AM
blinded by too much sun .... 2
Re: My Mamma's Hands by amateurR	13-Sep-02/11:41 PM
pragmatic fingernails an interesting phrase but should only be used once ,or if intentionally reversed closer together ... paints a picture of death .... is that right ? .. 4
Re: A Man Of The World by vulcan	13-Sep-02/11:49 PM
sounds like you woke from a nice dream to a nasty reality .... would have worked better for me if fairy fiddle and gate were on separate lines as then killing the gate would have had more impact ..... 4
Re: Spellbound by Limness	14-Sep-02/12:01 AM
Gold will tell others the words we have said ..... no comprendo .... the rest has definitely got something , shows feeling and thought ..... your feline escort is plural , is that condensed into your one lover ? ... 6
Re: Raining in Dream by memorybabe	14-Sep-02/12:18 AM
sounds like its chock-full of meaning ..... couple of typos ( ? ) stop me searching for it ..... 4
Re: Im different so what? by xblackstarsx	14-Sep-02/12:20 AM
wouldn't worry about them ..... fuck 'em ! ...... 4
Re: Lonely by xblackstarsx	14-Sep-02/12:23 AM
that'as what friends are for ..... a good cry is great but self pity in a poem doesn't do it .. 3
Re: Inside by Jagang	14-Sep-02/12:28 AM
is you xbsx ? or the new beat generation emerging ? ..... do i care ? ..... 2
Re: Emptiness by Jagang	14-Sep-02/12:32 AM
teen suicide in never memorable except for parents .... we've all been there . maybe nothing matters , but why should it ? .... 2
Re: Persephone by Lynn	14-Sep-02/12:35 AM
bloody 'ell ! .... that woke me up ... 7
Re: Full Fathom Five by vulcan	14-Sep-02/1:16 AM
what crap , one thinks at the start .... then balloons beating bashfully reinforce blueness to grab attention .. and then superior literary knowledge demands more respect ... an interesting acceptance curve ... is nuisant from nuisance or of the night ? .... could i suggest use of (i think ) subjunctive ... were it not for S's sake .... 6
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Sep-02/3:21 PM
restless , or calm ? flows nice ... likewise images .. 5
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Sep-02/3:24 PM
it may sound petty , but typos definitely detract .... 3
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Sep-02/3:28 PM
lol .... dunno why .... 4
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Sep-02/3:30 PM
quite qute quomment on us way of life ... 4