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Lonely (Free verse) by xblackstarsx
Painful, but feels right as i start to cry,
Everything in my life has been a lie.
No one cares but my friends
As i lay thinking how it ends
Hate me for the way i dress
For freedom of expression is a lie,
I try to do it less
As a tear rolls down my eye
Is this how its going to end
All i remember is drops of red
Lonely is what i am
And nobody gives a damn
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.2142856
Weighted score: 3.6945384
Overall Rank: 13552
Posted: September 13, 2002 9:36 PM PDT; Last modified: September 13, 2002 9:36 PM PDT
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