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Lonely (Free verse) by xblackstarsx
Painful, but feels right as i start to cry, Everything in my life has been a lie. No one cares but my friends As i lay thinking how it ends Hate me for the way i dress For freedom of expression is a lie, I try to do it less As a tear rolls down my eye Is this how its going to end All i remember is drops of red Lonely is what i am And nobody gives a damn

Up the ladder: Devil, BEWARE!!!
Down the ladder: Stamp

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.2142856
Weighted score: 3.6945384
Overall Rank: 13552
Posted: September 13, 2002 9:36 PM PDT; Last modified: September 13, 2002 9:36 PM PDT
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[3] pete @ 194.222.69.43 | 14-Sep-02/12:23 AM | Reply
that'as what friends are for ..... a good cry is great but self pity in a poem doesn't do it .. 3
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