on A parking lot, a smoke, and the pleasure of being alone by thepinkbunnyofdoom
5 Aug 2003, 1:39 PM
no eyebrows and a cameltoe sounds more interesting and diverse...haha...i just don't like how 13 sounds.
on Moosefart's Revenge by wwFrasier Allonbyww
4 Aug 2003, 1:29 PM
i dont' have 8 names....
i thougth she liked my rewrite :(
i'm going to cry
i thougth she liked my rewrite :(
i'm going to cry
on Moosefart's Revenge by wwFrasier Allonbyww
4 Aug 2003, 1:28 PM
btw, she's a fucking ugly cunt
on Moosefart's Revenge by wwFrasier Allonbyww
4 Aug 2003, 1:27 PM
YES!
FREE ADVERTISING!
FREE ADVERTISING!
replying on I Hate Andy Jeon by JoyLuck
1 Aug 2003, 2:19 AM
lol u serious
i wasn't that sure about this one
it didn't exactly come out as i wanted to
and stuff didn't fit on the little submit box
so this is a very much scaled down version
but i think i'm going to take it off and re do it
i wasn't that sure about this one
it didn't exactly come out as i wanted to
and stuff didn't fit on the little submit box
so this is a very much scaled down version
but i think i'm going to take it off and re do it
replying on My Last Plea by Inconceivable_Dreams
31 Jul 2003, 1:37 AM
I'm sure there is something interesting you are saying here, but when i read it my mind just gets stuff on this repititious rhyming and i start to lose track of what you're trying to say. Instead of sentences i start to think "say everday smile pile sorrow tomorrow light fight remains insane plea flee alon tone."
on My Last Plea by Inconceivable_Dreams
31 Jul 2003, 1:09 AM
all the rhyming takes away from your poem
on And so the spider spun by horus8
30 Jul 2003, 10:58 PM
NICE
Can you look for the drained corpse of that lil bee, museheart, in that web of yours? I cannot find her anywhere.
replying on I sat for an hour to watch a spider by Jimbo
30 Jul 2003, 10:38 PM
lol
lol
lol
lol
lol
lol
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that is what i did to the spider after one minute
i don't bother looking at 8 legged pieces of crap for than one minute. you know why? i'm ADD.
you're going to track his ass down over this stupid online POEMRANKER right? just give it up and continue to write. maybe you can write one called, "i stared at horus8's website for one hour and watch his video of the teacher and a swingset." then you'll have something interesting to write about. i gave your poem a ~
lol
lol
lol
lol
lol
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that is what i did to the spider after one minute
i don't bother looking at 8 legged pieces of crap for than one minute. you know why? i'm ADD.
you're going to track his ass down over this stupid online POEMRANKER right? just give it up and continue to write. maybe you can write one called, "i stared at horus8's website for one hour and watch his video of the teacher and a swingset." then you'll have something interesting to write about. i gave your poem a ~
on The Missing Love by loveisendless
29 Jul 2003, 9:59 PM
WOW! THIS POEM TOUCHED ME IN THE MOSTEST DEEPEST PLACES!
HERE"S A 10!!!!!!
HERE"S A 10!!!!!!
replying on Ode to a Fox Cub by http://mulberryfairy
27 Jul 2003, 2:08 PM
I would be happy to do that for you.
Shape it like a fox head.
Shape it like a fox head.
on There's no point by LosT SykoPath
24 Jul 2003, 10:47 PM
Donnie: I promise one day everything will be better for you.
on There's no point by LosT SykoPath
24 Jul 2003, 10:44 PM
"You're born"
"You're hear torn"
ahh the life sucks poem
take some tylenol
chase it with a shot of cuervo
and hit the sack
it'll be all better tommorow
Dr. Lilian Thurman: The search for God is absurd?
Donnie: It is if everyone dies alone.
(donnie darko)
"You're hear torn"
ahh the life sucks poem
take some tylenol
chase it with a shot of cuervo
and hit the sack
it'll be all better tommorow
Dr. Lilian Thurman: The search for God is absurd?
Donnie: It is if everyone dies alone.
(donnie darko)
replying on Her Sleeping Form by JoyLuck
24 Jul 2003, 1:53 AM
here is mine
Taste the Rainbow by JOYluck
You always used to swallow them whole didn't you?
Purple, Yellow, Orange, and blue.
After a minute of fucking I'd roll off you,
Trying not to notice that bored look on your face,
And you'd roll your eyes reaching over onto the nightstand
To dig into a red jumbo sized bag of skittles.
It was the weed. The weed I tell you!
Underperforming drug worked wonders on my penis.
At least, in my mind it did.
I'm not sixteen anymore. My hand gets less and less practice
Each new year. I swear this swelling fat around my stomach
and thighs makes it harder to look in the mirror.
I just can't find it anymore!
So, now you're lying there, torn up and bloody.
This knife really did its work.
Oragans, tissue, and cells. They are all the same.
Just on different levels. You get me?
You always used to swallow them whole didn't you?
I know for sure now.
Taste the Rainbow by JOYluck
You always used to swallow them whole didn't you?
Purple, Yellow, Orange, and blue.
After a minute of fucking I'd roll off you,
Trying not to notice that bored look on your face,
And you'd roll your eyes reaching over onto the nightstand
To dig into a red jumbo sized bag of skittles.
It was the weed. The weed I tell you!
Underperforming drug worked wonders on my penis.
At least, in my mind it did.
I'm not sixteen anymore. My hand gets less and less practice
Each new year. I swear this swelling fat around my stomach
and thighs makes it harder to look in the mirror.
I just can't find it anymore!
So, now you're lying there, torn up and bloody.
This knife really did its work.
Oragans, tissue, and cells. They are all the same.
Just on different levels. You get me?
You always used to swallow them whole didn't you?
I know for sure now.
on Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8
24 Jul 2003, 1:42 AM
ahh this poem has finally made it to the heap of trash known as the BEST
lets see how quickly the blue zeros shall knock you off again
sad
lets see how quickly the blue zeros shall knock you off again
sad
on knott's berry farm, jam & polaroids by <{Baba^Yaga}>
23 Jul 2003, 8:36 PM
i used to love that park
and it's jam
but they tricked me with the fake gold they make you pan out of a disgusting trough
:(
and it's jam
but they tricked me with the fake gold they make you pan out of a disgusting trough
:(
replying on Her Sleeping Form by JoyLuck
23 Jul 2003, 10:43 AM
well fuck that
i quit!
lol
jk
it's called a twist
he caught his love cheating on him
or he's just a crazy stalker of nicole simpson
i quit!
lol
jk
it's called a twist
he caught his love cheating on him
or he's just a crazy stalker of nicole simpson
replying on Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8
23 Jul 2003, 12:24 AM
what is lolttm? lol
on Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8
22 Jul 2003, 11:49 PM
ah...fucking zero giving haters dolling out 0s out of spite
my own 'poem' was hit up with blue zeros
oh well
i dont' care
it wasn't even a poem
it was a house
:(
my own 'poem' was hit up with blue zeros
oh well
i dont' care
it wasn't even a poem
it was a house
:(
blew me away