Re: Speaking my mind. Brilliant Idea! by thepinkbunnyofdoom	12-Aug-03/11:33 PM
oh wow the first part blew me away
Re: A parking lot, a smoke, and the pleasure of being alone by thepinkbunnyofdoom	5-Aug-03/1:39 PM
no eyebrows and a cameltoe sounds more interesting and diverse...haha...i just don't like how 13 sounds.
Re: Moosefart's Revenge by wwFrasier Allonbyww	4-Aug-03/1:29 PM
i dont' have 8 names.... i thougth she liked my rewrite :( i'm going to cry
Re: Moosefart's Revenge by wwFrasier Allonbyww	4-Aug-03/1:28 PM
btw, she's a fucking ugly cunt
Re: Moosefart's Revenge by wwFrasier Allonbyww	4-Aug-03/1:27 PM
YES! FREE ADVERTISING!
Re: a comment on I Hate Andy Jeon by JoyLuck	1-Aug-03/2:19 AM
lol u serious i wasn't that sure about this one it didn't exactly come out as i wanted to and stuff didn't fit on the little submit box so this is a very much scaled down version but i think i'm going to take it off and re do it
Re: a comment on My Last Plea by Inconceivable_Dreams	31-Jul-03/1:37 AM
I'm sure there is something interesting you are saying here, but when i read it my mind just gets stuff on this repititious rhyming and i start to lose track of what you're trying to say. Instead of sentences i start to think "say everday smile pile sorrow tomorrow light fight remains insane plea flee alon tone."
Re: My Last Plea by Inconceivable_Dreams	31-Jul-03/1:09 AM
all the rhyming takes away from your poem
Re: And so the spider spun by horus8	30-Jul-03/10:58 PM
NICE Can you look for the drained corpse of that lil bee, museheart, in that web of yours? I cannot find her anywhere.
Re: a comment on I sat for an hour to watch a spider by Jimbo	30-Jul-03/10:38 PM
lol lol lol lol lol lol ~~~~ ~~~~~~ ~~~~ ~~~~~ ~~~~ ~~~~ ~~~~~ ~~~~ ~~~~ ~~~~ ~~~~ ~~ !!! ~~~~~~~ ~~~ ~~~~ ~~~~ ~~~~ ~~~ !!! ~~~ ~~~~ ~~~~ ~~ ~~~~ ~~~~~ ~~~~ ~~~~ ~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~ that is what i did to the spider after one minute i don't bother looking at 8 legged pieces of crap for than one minute. you know why? i'm ADD. you're going to track his ass down over this stupid online POEMRANKER right? just give it up and continue to write. maybe you can write one called, "i stared at horus8's website for one hour and watch his video of the teacher and a swingset." then you'll have something interesting to write about. i gave your poem a ~
Re: The Missing Love by loveisendless	29-Jul-03/9:59 PM
WOW! THIS POEM TOUCHED ME IN THE MOSTEST DEEPEST PLACES! HERE"S A 10!!!!!!
Re: a comment on Ode to a Fox Cub by http://mulberryfairy	27-Jul-03/2:08 PM
I would be happy to do that for you. Shape it like a fox head.
Re: There's no point by LosT SykoPath	24-Jul-03/10:47 PM
Donnie: I promise one day everything will be better for you.
Re: There's no point by LosT SykoPath	24-Jul-03/10:44 PM
"You're born" "You're hear torn" ahh the life sucks poem take some tylenol chase it with a shot of cuervo and hit the sack it'll be all better tommorow Dr. Lilian Thurman: The search for God is absurd? Donnie: It is if everyone dies alone. (donnie darko)
Re: a comment on Her Sleeping Form by JoyLuck	24-Jul-03/1:53 AM
here is mine Taste the Rainbow by JOYluck You always used to swallow them whole didn't you? Purple, Yellow, Orange, and blue. After a minute of fucking I'd roll off you, Trying not to notice that bored look on your face, And you'd roll your eyes reaching over onto the nightstand To dig into a red jumbo sized bag of skittles. It was the weed. The weed I tell you! Underperforming drug worked wonders on my penis. At least, in my mind it did. I'm not sixteen anymore. My hand gets less and less practice Each new year. I swear this swelling fat around my stomach and thighs makes it harder to look in the mirror. I just can't find it anymore! So, now you're lying there, torn up and bloody. This knife really did its work. Oragans, tissue, and cells. They are all the same. Just on different levels. You get me? You always used to swallow them whole didn't you? I know for sure now.
Re: Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8	24-Jul-03/1:42 AM
ahh this poem has finally made it to the heap of trash known as the BEST lets see how quickly the blue zeros shall knock you off again sad
Re: knott's berry farm, jam & polaroids by <{Baba^Yaga}>	23-Jul-03/8:36 PM
i used to love that park and it's jam but they tricked me with the fake gold they make you pan out of a disgusting trough :(
Re: a comment on Her Sleeping Form by JoyLuck	23-Jul-03/10:43 AM
well fuck that i quit! lol jk it's called a twist he caught his love cheating on him or he's just a crazy stalker of nicole simpson
Re: a comment on Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8	23-Jul-03/12:24 AM
what is lolttm? lol
Re: Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8	22-Jul-03/11:49 PM
ah...fucking zero giving haters dolling out 0s out of spite my own 'poem' was hit up with blue zeros oh well i dont' care it wasn't even a poem it was a house :(