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The Missing Love (Free verse) by loveisendless i've heard all is to whisper,
& felt all is to see,
from the silence of my prayers so sure,
to the dreams i came to believe,
& as the nights layed in darkness,
& nothing was to touch love so near,
until i felt your heart of a kiss,
to make the magic reappear,
BUT AS SOMETHING STILL FEELS SO EMPTY,
AS THE SECRETS VANISHED TO THINK,
UNTIL TIME OF TESTS LEAD TO FIND ME,
THE MISSING LOVE.....
of a golden link!
Up the ladder:
bottoms up
Down the ladder:
D.I.Y.M Syndrome
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.125
Posted: July 29, 2003 8:29 PM PDT; Last modified: July 29, 2003 8:29 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.764676 Overall Rank: 11420 Comments:
Doesn't fit together well.
It would be better without the capitalised onwards 140 view(s)
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