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The Missing Love (Free verse) by loveisendless

i've heard all is to whisper, & felt all is to see, from the silence of my prayers so sure, to the dreams i came to believe, & as the nights layed in darkness, & nothing was to touch love so near, until i felt your heart of a kiss, to make the magic reappear, BUT AS SOMETHING STILL FEELS SO EMPTY, AS THE SECRETS VANISHED TO THINK, UNTIL TIME OF TESTS LEAD TO FIND ME, THE MISSING LOVE..... of a golden link!

richa 29-Jul-03/11:36 PM
Doesn't fit together well.

It would be better without the capitalised onwards




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