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There's no point (Lyric) by LosT SykoPath
Your born...you grow up your heart torn, you blow up There's no fuckin point to this 'cause the damn world is full of shit. Thoes things that make us cry, like getting hurt or seeing someone you love die. They make life such a bitch. Feelin lost not knowing which is which. Sure we have thoes rare good times but most are wore times, the "there's no point to life" times. Life's to short to accomplish all your dreams, What's the point of even thinking these things. You "fall in love" to then have your heart broken It only happened because the other perosn was jokin'. You sit there depressed, feeling sad or mad Cuz you're thinking "That could of been the best thing I've ever had." So now you've decided to put yourself out of misery and pain. You just cocked back your gun and shot a bullet through your skull piercing your brain. As your body drops to the ground like a rag doll. Blood seeping out your head wound as you fall. You land with a little splat as the blood drains out around you. Your last thought, "Was that really, the right thing to do?".

Up the ladder: Teen Hardcore
Down the ladder: Watching My Son Sleep.

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.8333335
Weighted score: 4.9551764
Overall Rank: 8715
Posted: July 24, 2003 10:41 PM PDT; Last modified: July 24, 2003 10:41 PM PDT
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[n/a] JoyLuck @ 68.75.19.117 | 24-Jul-03/10:44 PM | Reply
"You're born"
"You're hear torn"

ahh the life sucks poem
take some tylenol
chase it with a shot of cuervo
and hit the sack
it'll be all better tommorow

Dr. Lilian Thurman: The search for God is absurd?
Donnie: It is if everyone dies alone.
(donnie darko)
[n/a] JoyLuck @ 68.75.19.117 | 24-Jul-03/10:47 PM | Reply
Donnie: I promise one day everything will be better for you.
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 | 25-Jul-03/12:55 AM | Reply
A gay on rainbow bumper stickers.
[10] walrus8 @ 195.157.153.253 | 25-Jul-03/9:23 AM | Reply
Brilliant! I love this poeme! I have learnt it off my heart and now I must log off as I'm going to read it aloud in a pet's mortuary to a bagpipe accompaniment. Cheers!
[10] eliznhaz @ 65.246.232.101 | 3-May-05/2:29 PM | Reply
wow this is an excellent poem
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