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Watching My Son Sleep.

by Mona Lisa

Member since 2003 · Posted 14 Sep 2003 · 3 comments

My little lamb sleeps, With his pants the wrong way round, Snor-ing like his Dad.

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[9] http://mulberryfairy 14-Sep-03/11:05 AM Reply
Cute, and ambiguous as to the narrator's feelings there at the end.
[6] nentwined 14-Sep-03/7:38 PM Reply
why the dash in snoring?
[10] Bachus 16-Nov-03/1:34 AM Reply
Classy. I wish my mom was normal like that a lot.