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Watching My Son Sleep. (Haiku) by Mona Lisa My little lamb sleeps,
With his pants the wrong way round,
Snor-ing like his Dad.
Up the ladder:
There's no point
Down the ladder:
Love doggerel
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Posted: September 14, 2003 5:27 AM PDT; Last modified: September 14, 2003 5:27 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.9551764 Overall Rank: 8716 Comments:
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http://mulberryfairy @ 216.195.146.119
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14-Sep-03/11:05 AM
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Cute, and ambiguous as to the narrator's feelings there at the end.
why the dash in snoring?
Classy. I wish my mom was normal like that a lot.
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