on KAT 2 by nentwined
7 Jun 2003, 4:49 AM
very nice sounds, k. not sure about the line breaks. reading it aloud, they sound random, and stop the flow of the words.
on Pretzel by daryash-koh
16 Jul 2003, 11:11 AM
why pretzel?
on some deleted poem
6 Jun 2003, 9:04 PM
the beatles lyrics got to you, eh?
on Las Gaviotas by Bachus
16 Jul 2003, 11:15 AM
pretty, so pretty.
on hermetic by Bill Z Bub
21 Jul 2003, 10:31 AM
8. infinitely better than you were just a few months ago. i'd say the hunger's shaping you.
on null by Bill Z Bub
21 Jul 2003, 10:29 AM
nice, but i'm confused by the tease of the the sister. do you man-mandle july, or her sister, or both?
on The Gecko, and the Italian book collector by horus8
7 Jun 2003, 4:45 AM
i, personally, like geckos. and so i laughed guiltily.
on A Perfectly Reasonable Question by baughworm
7 Jun 2003, 2:18 PM
usually, one glimpses into a room through a not-quite-closed door. could it be that in her haste, she thought she had shut it? and it creaked open, but she failed to notice it since her focus was elsewhere?
otherwise, quite strong.
otherwise, quite strong.
on Hunting God by Shardik
3 Jun 2003, 6:01 PM
the party's over, sunshine.
<whine> the perry's, though known ravers, made a case to the master, and plagiary's no joke, any more.
p.s. picasso's already dead.
site the next picasso's head.
<whine> the perry's, though known ravers, made a case to the master, and plagiary's no joke, any more.
p.s. picasso's already dead.
site the next picasso's head.
on some deleted poem
3 Jun 2003, 6:25 PM
oh, h. in the words of the immortal billy squier, c. 1981, "everybody wants you!"
on I am the gayest by walrus8
21 Jul 2003, 10:23 AM
heinous.
on Windmill by the Sea by Jeremi B. Handrinos
16 Jul 2003, 7:51 AM
let me know when you post the mp3, okay>?