Re: 9/11 by dougsoderstrom	6-Dec-02/9:28 AM
mawkish and trite. As substantial as a United Way commercial.
Re: one word by Blade	6-Dec-02/9:22 AM
hackneyed
Re: An Enchanting Vision of Beauty by dalva	30-Oct-02/9:13 PM
This is prose
Re: James Dean by horus8	30-Oct-02/9:13 PM
brilliant
Re: Life As a Boat by dougsoderstrom	26-Sep-02/4:27 PM
the ol' 9-3-1 haiku. of course!
Re: Conversation with a Clock III by morffrom	26-Sep-02/4:24 PM
compact and clever
Re: Russian Roulette by <~>	20-Sep-02/11:57 PM
I would change the title to "5 out of 6 Dentists" or something vague. Otherwise, good poem.
Re: Frail Monsters/Wounded Souls by Wulf	20-Sep-02/11:55 PM
There are as many stanzas to your poem as there were in Jesus' lifetimes, 33. This poem is 33 stanzas too long.
Re: Lysander cried by bornagainpoet	20-Sep-02/11:53 PM
I doubt your parents are pleased. 2 thumbs down
Re: recent submissions by <~>	7-Aug-02/7:35 PM
too self-aware
Re: Birth by nentwined	7-Aug-02/7:32 PM
return to the womb haikus are cliched
Re: Dragons by austimb	18-Jul-02/5:21 PM
12 sided dice