Re: a comment on Mermaid at Dawn by <~>	13-Sep-02/1:21 PM
WHERE'S MY BLAH, BLAH, BLAH, DAMMIT!
Re: a comment on Mermaid at Dawn by <~>	13-Sep-02/1:20 PM
yeah, but he'd still limp it in a man...
Re: Mother! by kawakurdi	13-Sep-02/12:48 PM
and gives an eternal abode for him as well. As a poem, this short piece encapsulates your anguish succinctly, kawakurdi. i feel it when i read it.
Re: a comment on pissed off pretentious prat by keatsImnot	13-Sep-02/12:41 PM
mebbe so, wingy-d. blah some more, pretty please?
Re: a comment on Full Fathom Five by vulcan	13-Sep-02/12:29 PM
I sent you an email. hope you like it.
Re: a comment on Mermaid at Dawn by <~>	13-Sep-02/12:02 PM
you the MAN. (uh, make that the 'gay man'...)
Re: a comment on pissed off pretentious prat by keatsImnot	13-Sep-02/11:59 AM
you got me on that one, wingy-D. still, it trips me up and i think the point could have been made less repetetively; don't you agree, fondlee?
Re: a comment on Mermaid at Dawn by <~>	13-Sep-02/9:26 AM
thanks, p&k. you're right. ...'s gone now. z
Re: 9/11 by dougsoderstrom	13-Sep-02/9:05 AM
now, was that really necessary, doug? any of it?
Re: pissed off pretentious prat by keatsImnot	13-Sep-02/8:06 AM
nice, but exile/all alone is redundant... uzwyze, nice job
Re: Full Fathom Five by vulcan	13-Sep-02/7:57 AM
this is good, vulcan. may i make a few suggestions, to tighten it up?
Re: a comment on We visited the gay men on the veranda by Frass	12-Sep-02/9:02 PM
is Frass outing himself (as straight), right here on poemrancor?!!
Re: Lysander cried by bornagainpoet	12-Sep-02/9:01 PM
or with L. from midsummernight's dream? or with the judge?
Re: a comment on Mermaid at Dawn by <~>	12-Sep-02/8:17 PM
Clarification: i very much like poetandknowit. he is an egotistical arse at times; but i believe that he does it to grate, and so it makes me chuckle instead (most of the time). i just like the way 'p&k' looks better than the all caps version. he's like the jabberwoc, and i'm outgrabe.
Re: a comment on My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus	12-Sep-02/6:58 AM
i am not jealous, merely voracious and rapacious. see if handyshandy can twist you up like me; let him try. and what about my confrere, birthmark? you've forgotten us both? since you've donned those angelic beaters, you've taken up airs. you are base. come back to your own.
Re: a comment on Gone Away by Christof	12-Sep-02/6:17 AM
oh yeah. that was an excellent soultion!!!! only one small stumble, and it is mine only, i am sure: the word 'dead' is leaden. but that is minor.
Re: a comment on Gone Away by Christof	12-Sep-02/6:05 AM
i'll save my vote for when you've worked it out. it wouldn't be fair to vote on a thing unfinished.k?
Re: a comment on Gone Away by Christof	12-Sep-02/5:56 AM
it was the last line that didn't work...not the middle.
Re: a comment on Gone Away by Christof	12-Sep-02/5:53 AM
oh no. don't do that! take out the middle like you just did...you've roughed it up, and pulled out its soul.
Re: a comment on Anfal: Our 9/11 happened many times over by kawakurdi	12-Sep-02/5:50 AM
well put, mrs.g. that's it exactly.