Re: Final Comment by dougsoderstrom	27-May-03/8:10 AM
professor soderstrom, what makes you a friend to all? many here have not treated you as one. in fact, they have treated you as an enemy. so, why?
Re: a comment on we're insane by nolan	26-May-03/10:48 AM
well, since mother tortise was seen cavorting about the clouds with little ganeesha, i'd say she felt all wet and splotchy--torn up inside, if you must know. honestly -=Dark_Angel=-, I didn't think anyone could be so cruel. what with the elder tortoise's recent injuries, and her having been 'outed' for all the world to see (well, inside-outed, really), i would have thought one with such a celestial name might have shown a little more kindess than to relate her story on such an international forum. maybe the questio you should ask yourself is, 'what shall i have for dinner?' and the answer should be, 'not turtle soup, again! hold the grapes, ship's prawne! hold them firmly, and resist!'
Re: a comment on we're insane by nolan	26-May-03/8:28 AM
yes, you youd touch the clouds inside and out, in thousands of little ways. and, like ganeesha's eyes, not only would you never have to look back, you would never be able to!
Re: a comment on Theology by dougsoderstrom	26-May-03/8:09 AM
no. i have not gone anyhere. i have withdrawn. settle made a terrible mess of his scree, and i blame myself. i am moving to africa.
Re: a comment on Theology by dougsoderstrom	25-May-03/9:58 PM
yeah, well at least he got wanked for it
Re: a comment on Pour vous en seul by e1ementfire	30-Apr-03/1:01 PM
moi, j'adore l'homme de pomme de terre.
Re: a comment on Yay for Unspeakable Evil! by razorgrin	29-Apr-03/7:59 PM
Yet with strange aeons, even Death may die. or, the thing that should not be. i'll take that hug, now, please. :)
Re: a comment on The Bored Housewife by Caducus	29-Apr-03/8:40 AM
oh she needs more than that. it's a lot less lonely, being alone. primary source knowledge, my friend. as someone who wouldn't buy that, i say: she's as much to blame as he is. cad, you didn't judge, but it's there.
Re: Awakened by temptalia	28-Apr-03/8:29 PM
well, there's something about the sky swallowing you whole which betrays the pain you fight through. being swallowed, submitting,--you see what i mean? i feel like you are forged by will, and then you're bait on a hook at the end. this is strong writing. but i want a stronger end. (am i ever satisfied?)
Re: Yay for Unspeakable Evil! by razorgrin	28-Apr-03/8:24 PM
but , surely, not without thine hand!!!
Re: I am a dream by mozac	24-Apr-03/7:40 AM
lovely.
Re: Before The Miscarriage. by scitz	24-Apr-03/7:35 AM
fuck all. now, critically speaking, eliminate the rhymes. they cheapen it.
Re: Fighting erosion by INTRANSIT	23-Apr-03/7:02 AM
my my my. someone has been doing their homework. this rocks.
Re: a comment on Damaged By 'Weakness' by Mr Pig	10-Apr-03/1:57 PM
piggy, i got that. a poem like this will get you chicks. when you battle your demons for *love*, chicks dig it. as for people thinking you're a freak, so what? i'd rather that, personally. stir things up a bit. maybe get them thinking. so, when i wrote my oedipus stuff, i posted it. personally, i hope they do find me freakish. because i'd rather be that than complacent any day. it sucks that your dad was afraid to show loving kindness. it really does. but that's no reason you should hold back, especially if you feel yourself wanting to express it. sex is so much better when you can forget about perceptions and enjoy the other person, and how you please each other. lavish it on, piggy. it's good to love. trust me. and girls put up barriers too, so it's a double-fuck until you find someone you can let them down with. i'll have to give you the edits later. got no time today. send me your email, and i'll send you a more complete commentary. xo, z
Re: Damaged By 'Weakness' by Mr Pig	10-Apr-03/8:20 AM
pig, what do you want from me? editor's comments, or a woman's comments? or both? rsvp, z
Re: a comment on I Love My Socks by Bazilla	9-Apr-03/1:13 PM
it's a near-rhyme. why don't you go to a site for assholes, since you know so much about that condition, and nothing about that of being a poet?
Re: Anouk by daniella	9-Apr-03/1:12 PM
d--this is a gentle and humble lovesong, if ever i read one. thanks for posting it here.
Re: a comment on Phalus by Bobjim_returns	9-Apr-03/12:51 PM
no, it's plagiarized.
Re: a comment on YOU ARE ALL WANKERS! by Bobjim	9-Apr-03/12:47 PM
no. you can get one for being a fuckwad too.
Re: Love Greased by Jeremi B. Handrinos	9-Apr-03/12:43 PM
less-than-silent lucidity. you just can't be stopped. got an mp3 of this one yet?