Re: a comment on The Poet by wLeBlancw	11-Mar-03/10:07 PM
Wow. I like your version much better than mine. You're a master of the english language indeed.
Re: a comment on Threnody by Nanshe	11-Mar-03/9:39 PM
So your mistress left the poor poet for the wealthy real estate tycoon down 3 blocks? And now you are just left with a girlfriend you don't give a fuck about.
Re: We by Nanshe	11-Mar-03/9:37 PM
Are you getting married? That's the idea that I am getting.
Re: Threnody by Nanshe	11-Mar-03/9:31 PM
Amazing. 10. Who did you write this for?
Re: Blustered by INTRANSIT	11-Mar-03/9:10 PM
Can you come up with a better title? You don't title your other poems Free Verse, do you?
Re: a comment on Limericks of hot seething love, gone bad. by horus8	11-Mar-03/9:09 PM
somethings=some things
Re: Contention by Drummer	11-Mar-03/8:49 PM
Something I like. The flow works really well here. 9
Re: our little secret by famenglory	11-Mar-03/8:45 PM
Oh, okay. My lips are sealed. What? And your point is?
Re: Prest by GregDeEgg	11-Mar-03/8:41 PM
What the fuck?
Re: Invisible too by horus8	11-Mar-03/8:38 PM
Better than your other ones. Here's a 5. My favorite part of this poem was your use of Incommunicado. How brave and original you are!
Re: Anna N. Smiths vagina monologue in Evangelistic tongues by horus8	11-Mar-03/8:35 PM
Are you seriously that bored with your life that you have nothing better to do than to write crappy poems about Anna-Nicole Smith? Whoever watches that show should be hung. No wonder american television is pure and utter crap. Morons like you who watch this shit are supporting it. 0 for wasting my time.
Re: Limericks of hot seething love, gone bad. by horus8	11-Mar-03/8:33 PM
And the point of your poem is the following: Stay with the hag you have until you fall in love with her since you have no balls to leave. Been there done that. How old are you? 21? 3 for effort.
Re: a comment on The Innocent by wLeBlanc IIIw	11-Mar-03/8:31 PM
Name drop? I beg your pardon. I am about to go and read some of your works. Let's wait and see how profound your poetry is.
Re: Family Portrait by Mr Pig	10-Mar-03/4:10 PM
I re-read it and I liked it much better the second time around. It's amazing how much you miss by reading things once. Here's a 9. By the way, my father also had a mistress so I can identify. Every summer we would go to the beach together as mom stayed at home. She made my dad happy so he treated my mom even better. I do not necessarily thing that it is a bad thing to have one as long as you can manage to keep everyone happy.
Re: Stand in line for nothingness by Crakyamuni	10-Mar-03/4:06 PM
Break it up and shorten it. That would give it more of a punch.
Re: Have you ever heard of William Carlost Williams 24 by notule	10-Mar-03/3:12 PM
Wow
Re: a comment on Lost by LeBlank II	10-Mar-03/3:09 PM
What? I don't understand the second part of your comment. Please explain.
Re: Family Portrait by Mr Pig	10-Mar-03/3:02 PM
Reads like a short story. Traditional. Nothing new. Some nice images.
Re: a comment on Floating in mindless clutter of words by wLeBlancw	9-Mar-03/7:55 PM
How many fucking user names do you have? I am confused. Thank you, but no thanks. I would not be in your company even if you paid me. You are an obnoxious prick without manners. How the fuck do you just start attcking someone who just joins a forum to post his poems and to get feedback. What the fuck is wrong with you? Are you crazy? Seriously? Thanks for the 6. None of the poems under Shardik are even worthy of anything above a 4. Go finger bang your hot wife now. What a weirdo!
Re: My pimp's ceiling fan by Shardik	9-Mar-03/7:45 PM
You're a great poet, and a 7.5! You are a composer, really? Did not like your music too much. Sorry. You sound like a beaver being gang raped. I bet that's how you got the name gang box, smart guy. With an IQ of 54, you really don't impress me. Go write some more impressive poetry now. shooo