| Re: a comment on I've lost my poetic edge by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
19-Jul-03/5:49 PM |
lol i wasn't trying to be poetic in my comment at all
but that's a good revision
no
who are the Random Heros
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| Re: a comment on Fucking A!?!? by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
19-Jul-03/5:46 PM |
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| Re: Fucking A!?!? by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
19-Jul-03/5:45 PM |
Look.. if you had.. one shot, or one opportunity
To seize everything you ever wanted.. in one moment
Would you capture it.. or just let it slip? Yo..
His palms are sweaty, knees weak, arms are heavy
There's vomit on his sweater already, mom's spaghetti
He's nervous, but on the surface he looks calm and ready
to drops bombs, but he keeps on forgetting
what he wrote down, the whole crowd goes so loud
He opens his mouth but the words won't come out
He's chokin, how? Everybody's jokin now
The clock's run out, time's up, over - BLAOW!
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| Re: Border towns & the runs by horus8 |
17-Jul-03/6:25 PM |
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| Re: Its Blue by aurora |
3-Jul-03/10:41 AM |
eifel 65
or watever
that nasty euro techno trash band comes to mind
:( bad thoughts
yet pleasant poetry
i'm torn
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| Re: a comment on My last ever poemranker transmission by King Abdullah II |
3-Jul-03/8:01 AM |
lol i knew hours 8 and jeremy b were the same
but i wasn't sure about baba yaga
and shardik surprised me
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| Re: a comment on My last ever poemranker transmission by King Abdullah II |
3-Jul-03/8:00 AM |
ssh
a 'legend' has left us....haha
poemranker will be boring :(
unless
the god returns in another form?
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| Re: a comment on Extra Strength VaginexII (Free curse) by Wurt Kale by Shardik |
3-Jul-03/12:43 AM |
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| Re: My last ever poemranker transmission by King Abdullah II |
3-Jul-03/12:38 AM |
sad to hear this
i'll miss your witty comments
and esp your poems
goodluck and goodbye
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| Re: Extra Strength VaginexII (Free curse) by Wurt Kale by Shardik |
2-Jul-03/6:22 PM |
lol
dammit shardik
i was gunna write one making fun of the poem today.
u beat me to it
mine was gunna be called
Lubriderm: Advanced Therapy for extra dry skin
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| Re: a comment on Caesar and the Giant. (revised) by SupremeDreamer |
2-Jul-03/2:50 PM |
i miss cali
i used to live down in orange
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| Re: a comment on Erotic Crossroad in my Dream: So I Cream Into Me Panties by Luzr |
2-Jul-03/1:48 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Caesar and the Giant. (revised) by SupremeDreamer |
2-Jul-03/12:15 PM |
oh really
i live in cincy
but i'm in columbus for school.
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| Re: I wanna convert him by GAY AS FU*K |
2-Jul-03/12:06 PM |
i'm kinda sick of all your "gay" poems, must be the homophobe in me,
but this one is aight
and kinda funny.
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| Re: Orbiting Venus by scitz |
2-Jul-03/12:02 PM |
ahh nice imagery
"upon tepid brined skin."
tepid is like..less hot...moderately warm...lacking in passion. did you say it like that?
and brined....are u meaning salty?
good poem tho
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| Re: a comment on Caesar and the Giant. (revised) by SupremeDreamer |
2-Jul-03/11:52 AM |
well i have not danced that dance
i never ran around hinting at identities
anyways this is my last reply
hope to read more of your poems
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| Re: a comment on Caesar and the Giant. (revised) by SupremeDreamer |
2-Jul-03/11:50 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Caesar and the Giant. (revised) by SupremeDreamer |
2-Jul-03/11:33 AM |
i think horus8 thought i was settle
and i really didn't know what settle was?
i even asked him a couple times, but he did not reply
i agree we should drop this lol
let's just continue to write
are you dreamersupreme tho?
ha
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| Re: a comment on Extra Strength Tylenol by DurtKL |
2-Jul-03/11:27 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Caesar and the Giant. (revised) by SupremeDreamer |
2-Jul-03/11:17 AM |
i'd be honored to be richa or godswife
i have no clue who this Settle is.
i have no idea who doug is.
but you know what
i never thought my JoyLuck identity needed to be questioned.
it was just joyluck. i didn't go around having conversations with myslef. well i did comment once on baginga. but not to the extent of others.
but i don't want to dishonor anyone's rep by thinking they might the author's of "baginga" or "jellybeans" or "linefuck" or that house poem.
you're from ohio eh?
what part
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