| Re: The Wind by Reuben Spiteri |
1-Oct-02/9:18 AM |
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I like the rythm of this (kinda like the wind - hey, cool!)
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| Re: a comment on Life of a Cubicle Dweller by loneshadow29 |
1-Oct-02/9:16 AM |
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I wrote a couple, but I didn't see that you had commented on either of them, so I don't know if mine is (are) the one(s) you are looking for... ;)
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| Re: It could be a vase.... by Joyleaf |
1-Oct-02/9:08 AM |
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Not a vase? A paperweight? or maybe it IS a good friend! (Do I get it?!) hmmm...
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| Re: Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof |
1-Oct-02/7:26 AM |
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Interesting. I thought this was about not making a thing perfect.
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| Re: I Wish by liljsmith87 |
1-Oct-02/7:16 AM |
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Another good title would be "The glass is half empty."
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| Re: Reason for being late by Normo |
1-Oct-02/7:12 AM |
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Pretty good poem, but NOT a good plan ;)
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| Re: Cover song by bondjedi |
27-Sep-02/6:57 AM |
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Too derivative. (I thought that was Johnny Rivers who told me that.)
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| Re: January by greym0on |
26-Sep-02/7:08 PM |
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A breath of fresh air! (and a big snowman for you!!)
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| Re: a comment on Since The Fall by harrytuttle |
24-Sep-02/10:38 AM |
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Actually, the redundance is deliberate. I looked at it without them and it isn't the same poem (to me).
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| Re: Morning conflict by INTRANSIT |
24-Sep-02/6:47 AM |
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Not too bad, but there's too much mixing of old and new style's, or something. Don't know what I'm talking about....
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| Re: Words by PawnedTidal |
11-Sep-02/8:47 AM |
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| Re: say I! by Sapphire |
19-Jul-02/7:56 PM |
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| Re: Scythe by Isis |
19-Jul-02/7:35 AM |
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I got sleepy reading this...
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| Re: A Storm For Me by KatieKaBoom |
19-Jul-02/7:31 AM |
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| Re: in love with jane doe by crin |
15-Jul-02/6:50 AM |
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I liked this. A bit disjointed and needs to be scrubbed, spellingwise, but pretty ok otherwise...
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| Re: Enigma by BadPoet |
14-Jul-02/8:29 PM |
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| Re: Milk Bar by mogwai |
12-Jul-02/4:32 AM |
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| Re: Untitled. by LucidRevelation |
11-Jul-02/11:37 AM |
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