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Member since 2001 · Posted 16 Mar 2002 · 5 comments

my mini book it doth not lie betwixt the lines thoust should read for all my attentions t'will vie toward start of imaginations ripe, small seed

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[n/a] nentwined 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM Reply

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. I really can't parse it for rhythm (the thoust and attentions t'will); unsure what small seed renames... the mini book, or ... no, just cna't parse any of it. my eyes jump all over and the slower gears in my head start to crack. :( It seems pretty...

[5] silvertongueddevil 11-May-02/4:31 AM Reply

is imaginations missing an apostrophe? and should you really be using mini in a poem that also features betwixt and thoust in the same poem? or is that the modern world leaking in?

[9] Amelia 9-Jul-02/9:41 AM Reply

VERY GOOD!

[4] harrytuttle 19-Jul-02/7:56 PM Reply

thoust?

[10] ==Doylum 1-Aug-02/7:25 AM Reply

I love you