| Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments |
|
China, Silver, and an Emerald Lipstick (Free verse) by Enkidu Afraid I am, Afraid I stay
The wrath of woman night and day
Hear my plea I urge of thee
Do not embark on Rage's fray
She was caught, but she was hot
The sun could burn so brightly not
I do admit that little fit
She threw hampered my clever plot
I'll stand alone, right by my phone
Waiting for that bitch of stone
Just one plate you had to hate
You broke upon the wall like bone
My priceless wares, now through the air
And flying with an ease so fair
Preferring blue over emerald hue
This love unwrapped by my affairs
Up the ladder:
All A Mistake
Down the ladder:
say I!
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.9166665
Posted: April 13, 2004 6:06 PM PDT; Last modified: April 13, 2004 6:06 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.670137 Overall Rank: 2069 Comments:
stultus es
Stultus est sicut stultus facit...
Stultus est quisquis stultus est sicut stultus facit inquit.
Brutus est in atrium. Caecilius est in die via.
Puellae sub arbore sedent. Subito lupus adit. "eheu!" exclamant.
Hey, excellent useless mastery of a dead language!
But do you know QBasic? I do.
Of course I do.
a girl sits under a tree and a wolf suddenlycomes - she screams?
cool, thx.
Salve! permities adulescentum.
I want to think of this as you laughing at yourself, you writing a rather silly poem about a deep-felt hurt and making fun of the fact it was your affair that brought it all on.
cute.
it's sad that it's so true. well written though.
357 view(s)
|
||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
"I do admit that little fit
She threw hampered my clever plot"
would rather seen "thrown" not bone rhyme with stone (bone is illogical)
"ease so fair" blows.