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say I! (Free verse) by Sapphire

my mini book it doth not lie betwixt the lines thoust should read for all my attentions t'will vie toward start of imaginations ripe, small seed

nentwined 16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. I really can't parse it for rhythm (the thoust and attentions t'will); unsure what small seed renames... the mini book, or ... no, just cna't parse any of it. my eyes jump all over and the slower gears in my head start to crack. :( It seems pretty...




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