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say I! (Free verse) by Sapphire

my mini book it doth not lie betwixt the lines thoust should read for all my attentions t'will vie toward start of imaginations ripe, small seed

silvertongueddevil 11-May-02/4:31 AM
is imaginations missing an apostrophe? and should you really be using mini in a poem that also features betwixt and thoust in the same poem? or is that the modern world leaking in?




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