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Words (Free verse) by PawnedTidal
Your words were like a blade, Cutting straight to my heart. And now it's these words That are tearing us apart. How could you do this to me? How could you do this to us? I never did anything To disillusion your trust. These were not the kind of words That can easily be retracted. Don't bother with "I'm sorry." Or, "I just overreacted." I think the time has come For us to say good-bye. You have made the bed, And now it's time to lie.

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.047619
Weighted score: 4.064749
Overall Rank: 13329
Posted: September 9, 2002 8:35 PM PDT; Last modified: September 9, 2002 8:35 PM PDT
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[5] god'swife @ 209.179.136.133 | 10-Sep-02/12:55 AM | Reply
Don't forget to fuck her one last time strictly out of spite. Then tell her what a piece of shit she is and through her out of the house. A golden opportunity my friend. Otherwise no poetry.
[5] [mojo] @ 195.92.194.12 | 10-Sep-02/12:49 PM | Reply
A little obvious.5.
[1] poetandknowit @ 65.101.210.98 | 10-Sep-02/10:13 PM | Reply
Sometimes you just get dumped. This sounds more like an angry ex-love letter, but I am not giving you a 0.
[4] harrytuttle @ 208.20.220.69 | 11-Sep-02/8:47 AM | Reply
sheesh.
[3] -=SeTTle=- @ 140.186.49.230 | 4-Jan-03/10:34 PM | Reply
Piss Poor.
[5] RGallet @ 140.186.49.215 | 7-Jan-03/7:48 PM | Reply
It's all you have to do, just tellalittlelie.
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