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Words (Free verse) by PawnedTidal Your words were like a blade,
Cutting straight to my heart.
And now it's these words
That are tearing us apart.
How could you do this to me?
How could you do this to us?
I never did anything
To disillusion your trust.
These were not the kind of words
That can easily be retracted.
Don't bother with "I'm sorry."
Or, "I just overreacted."
I think the time has come
For us to say good-bye.
You have made the bed,
And now it's time to lie.
Up the ladder:
Some comfort
Down the ladder:
Jesus, I funneled enough beer to marry that?
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.047619
Posted: September 9, 2002 8:35 PM PDT; Last modified: September 9, 2002 8:35 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.064749 Overall Rank: 13324 Comments:
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god'swife @ 209.179.136.133
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10-Sep-02/12:55 AM
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Don't forget to fuck her one last time strictly out of spite. Then tell her what a piece of shit she is and through her out of the house. A golden opportunity my friend. Otherwise no poetry.
A little obvious.5.
Sometimes you just get dumped. This sounds more like an angry ex-love letter, but I am not giving you a 0.
sheesh.
Piss Poor.
It's all you have to do, just tellalittlelie.
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