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Words (Free verse) by PawnedTidal

Your words were like a blade, Cutting straight to my heart. And now it's these words That are tearing us apart. How could you do this to me? How could you do this to us? I never did anything To disillusion your trust. These were not the kind of words That can easily be retracted. Don't bother with "I'm sorry." Or, "I just overreacted." I think the time has come For us to say good-bye. You have made the bed, And now it's time to lie.

poetandknowit 10-Sep-02/10:13 PM
Sometimes you just get dumped. This sounds more like an angry ex-love letter, but I am not giving you a 0.




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