| Re: a comment on Pain by Teen14 |
8-Feb-03/12:22 PM |
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I think the title says it all about I felt: PAIN. Need there be more?
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| Re: a comment on Pain by Teen14 |
8-Feb-03/7:04 AM |
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I have no idea what you're talking about. I wrote this poem yesterday when I found out my girlfriend was in the hospital.
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| Re: Raw boy chiva by horus8 |
7-Feb-03/5:40 PM |
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Ok...this poem totally freaked me out. It gave me the chills.
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| Re: a comment on Dancers of the Night by Teen14 |
1-Feb-03/6:36 AM |
I just wanted to wrap it up. The world has been all lit by fire in homes. There are some distinct charcters in this poem: Hell fire, smoke, and flames.
The hell fire is taking a bad person to hell.
The smoke wants the darkness to go away.
The little embers are just happy and having a fun time.
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| Re: a comment on A Little Nightmare by Teen14 |
1-Feb-03/5:59 AM |
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No. It wouldn't have the same chilling effect.
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| Re: a comment on The Merry Man by Teen14 |
1-Feb-03/5:57 AM |
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It just means he's really happy. You know how little kids are always so happy? Well he's like that but 1000 times more. Also, no has commented on what this poem is about. Did anyone guess yet?
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| Re: a comment on A Little Nightmare by Teen14 |
31-Jan-03/7:34 PM |
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They need to be there. They're crucial! It's kind of like a song and they're the chorus. It's an echoing cry throughout the poem. It's needed.
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| Re: Confession by marvelis |
31-Jan-03/7:31 PM |
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Outstanding! Truly and utterly fantastic!
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| Re: Great Waters of End by marvelis |
31-Jan-03/7:27 PM |
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Wow....that was amazing. Great detail. You must've poured your heart right out!
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| Re: Life by marvelis |
31-Jan-03/7:23 PM |
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Very interesting poem. I got what it means and says a lot in such short space. Interesting...
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| Re: The Sunset Blvd. Cabbage limericks by Shardik |
31-Jan-03/4:21 PM |
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| Re: Love spank by Shardik |
31-Jan-03/3:33 PM |
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| Re: Despair by Caducus |
31-Jan-03/3:25 PM |
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Wow...what a great poem! That was excellent! I totally feel the dispair so I'm kind of sad now though. But all in all it was fantastic!
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| Re: I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike |
31-Jan-03/1:59 PM |
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That's really interesting and it makes a lot of sense, but it sounds more like a message than a poem.
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| Re: Because The Ground Is Still Frozen by razorgrin |
31-Jan-03/1:57 PM |
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Wow...ummm...ok....that's really scary....wow.....wow
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| Re: a comment on A Little Nightmare by Teen14 |
31-Jan-03/1:53 PM |
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It's supposed to capture the feelings and emotions of a nightmare. That's why it's a LYRICAL poem.
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