Re: a comment on Waiting to fall by aliena	13-Mar-08/6:44 PM
Point taken :)
Re: Lines Composed in a Vancouver Skyscraper by david	5-Dec-06/12:16 AM
I could see Vancouver in my mind's eye
Re: Just words by aliena	15-Nov-06/9:08 PM
Thanks Howl. I agree. I am thinking of a suitable line to clarify my intent.
Re: Just words by aliena	15-Nov-06/9:07 PM
Thanks Ranger! Point taken. Will make the change in the revised version.
Re: Patterns by aliena	15-May-04/9:45 AM
thanks sasha :-)
Re: Writing the Books by validus_vox	25-Apr-04/10:28 AM
I strolled with you..
Re: A Flower for Monet by Shuushin	2-Apr-04/12:08 AM
Excellent, excellent!!! take a 10 for this poem about my favourite impressionist
Re: a comment on Leaves, hope and dreams by aliena	2-Apr-04/12:03 AM
thanks fr the suggestion... I had orignally considered fallen leaves, but leaves is better
Re: a comment on Leaves, hope and dreams by aliena	2-Apr-04/12:00 AM
LOL :-)
Re: a comment on Municipal park by richa	1-Apr-04/11:56 PM
What is the final verdict? has or have?
Re: Municipal park by richa	1-Apr-04/11:56 PM
what is the fibal verdict? has or have?
Re: lullaby by the indign	1-Apr-04/11:51 PM
"as the dawn begins to fade brightening up the dusk" How??
Re: Color me Lifeless by alverland theme park	1-Apr-04/11:44 PM
"halting my whole world" ???
Re: Cargo pants by tre	1-Apr-04/11:39 PM
loved it..
Re: PEOPLE. (Debut) by Doc	1-Apr-04/11:37 PM
Waiting for part 2
Re: Shampoo and Condition by Luzr	1-Apr-04/9:34 AM
My routine has been quite as meaningless for the past 2 months. Perhaps even more so. It can summed in 4 words... eat, sleep, eat, sleep....... Wish I could put it words like you
Re: a comment on Leaves, hope and dreams by aliena	1-Apr-04/9:30 AM
thanks. I agree with you about interpretation. Mourning dead leaves? LOL never thought of that!! Interesting... Actually, I was flattering myself that the thunder was mourning my crushed dreams!! [along with the fallen leaves of course] Or maybe it is mourning all mankind's disappointments.... I guess I am raving a little bit today...
Re: a comment on Leaves, hope and dreams by aliena	1-Apr-04/9:24 AM
Thanks. I edited in haste and so mispelled "reverberating" :-(. The situation is like this. It is thundering sporadically outside and it kind of reminds me of an approaching plane. Maybe I should remove that whole line...
Re: a comment on Leaves, hope and dreams by aliena	1-Apr-04/9:18 AM
Hey thanks. This jet is causing lot of trouble. Actually, it is still thundering sporadically outside. It kind of reminds me of an approching plane. I suppose I included that line to make the whole thing vivid.. Would it be better if I just removed the line?
Re: a comment on Leaves, hope and dreams by aliena	1-Apr-04/9:13 AM
This jet is causing too many problems.. Actually its is still sporadically thundering outside here. It does remind of a plane approaching... maybe the poem would be better off sans the jet line I suppose...