Re: a comment on Leaves, hope and dreams by aliena	1-Apr-04/9:03 AM
Good question. LOL It is the thunder actually, but when I reread the poem, I see your point.. it could be the jet too. I am thinking of how to make it more clear....
Re: Shame by blkarakagain	24-Dec-02/12:08 AM
Umm... I definitely like this. For the nobility of the sentiments expressed here, take a 9
Re: Here There Be Dragons by blkarakagain	24-Dec-02/12:00 AM
I agree with the others, do something about the ending.The style is good
Re: The Coming Light by poetandknowit	23-Dec-02/11:48 PM
I had to read it twice, but it was worth it ,i suppose
Re: I have no Idea?...? by brazen	23-Dec-02/11:14 PM
I liked the second and third stanzas..........
Re: One by adrenalize	22-Dec-02/9:12 AM
good sentiment,amen
Re: missing time by Bill Z Bub	22-Dec-02/9:07 AM
Excellent!
Re: downtown bus by Bill Z Bub	22-Dec-02/8:59 AM
Interesting. I liked the bit about the cell phone.