replying on Leaves, hope and dreams by aliena
1 Apr 2004, 9:03 AM
Good question. LOL It is the thunder actually, but when I reread the poem, I see your point.. it could be the jet too. I am thinking of how to make it more clear....
on Shame by blkarakagain
24 Dec 2002, 12:08 AM
Umm... I definitely like this. For the nobility of the sentiments expressed here, take a 9
on Here There Be Dragons by blkarakagain
24 Dec 2002, 12:00 AM
I agree with the others, do something about the ending.The style is good
on The Coming Light by poetandknowit
23 Dec 2002, 11:48 PM
I had to read it twice, but it was worth it ,i suppose
on I have no Idea?...? by brazen
23 Dec 2002, 11:14 PM
I liked the second and third stanzas..........
on One by adrenalize
22 Dec 2002, 9:12 AM
good sentiment,amen
on missing time by Bill Z Bub
22 Dec 2002, 9:07 AM
Excellent!
on downtown bus by Bill Z Bub
22 Dec 2002, 8:59 AM
Interesting. I liked the bit about the cell phone.