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Patterns

Member since 2002 · Posted 15 May 2004 · 3 comments

As the sky above at night Is the world below it We see patterns in the arrangement Of stars in the firmament As heroes and bears Which some say are reflections Of our own aspirations and fears Humanity is no different A little always good or bad But most of it neither But rather as our perception Sometimes good, at times bad

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[5] Sasha 15-May-04/9:40 AM Reply
The last lines resemble a very badly delivered corny speech to a losing highschool football team.
[n/a] aliena 15-May-04/9:45 AM Reply
thanks sasha :-)
[5] Sasha › aliena 15-May-04/10:13 AM Reply
You're very welcome