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Patterns (Free verse) by aliena
As the sky above at night Is the world below it We see patterns in the arrangement Of stars in the firmament As heroes and bears Which some say are reflections Of our own aspirations and fears Humanity is no different A little always good or bad But most of it neither But rather as our perception Sometimes good, at times bad

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7998
Posted: May 15, 2004 9:38 AM PDT; Last modified: May 15, 2004 9:38 AM PDT
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[5] Sasha @ 69.138.236.63 | 15-May-04/9:40 AM | Reply
The last lines resemble a very badly delivered corny speech to a losing highschool football team.
[n/a] aliena @ 210.214.182.168 | 15-May-04/9:45 AM | Reply
thanks sasha :-)
[5] Sasha @ 69.138.236.63 > aliena | 15-May-04/10:13 AM | Reply
You're very welcome
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