regarding some deleted poem...	14-Nov-02/2:05 PM
In Frisco? Is he a member of the Residents? Eyeball 1 or the skull? SepArated.
Re: I'm a homicidal kind of guy (spoof of every 'down-home' song you've ever heard) by Yardbird	18-Nov-02/8:31 PM
Reminds me of that mathematican turned piano playing social commentator, Tom Lehrer, and his dastardly ditties such as "Poisoning Pigeons in the Park" and "The Hunters Song", among many others.
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Nov-02/9:03 PM
"If not for you, the birds wouldn't sing" or some such; who wrote that song? I just luv this sort of poetry, hh. The well thought out, improvisational phrase flinging, clever variety sprinkled with words you have to go look up. Would "Let her bide" be better?
Re: "Why would I need to get in touch with you?" by Limness	18-Nov-02/9:10 PM
I like "The mean in between".
regarding some deleted poem...	2-Dec-02/10:44 AM
I finally get back to p'ranker and the first thing I read is this! Zzin, it's such a strong poem, it deserves a better title.
regarding some deleted poem...	2-Dec-02/10:45 AM
should be "...young man named Jake".
regarding some deleted poem...	2-Dec-02/10:47 AM
CD, I JUST got off the phone with a friend who advised me to treat mountain spring water with a drop of bleach, even after filtering it through a triple Pur filter. I'll show him this poem.
regarding some deleted poem...	2-Dec-02/10:54 AM
I like it. "softer than your heartbeat"?
Re: Love Under Will by Tyriana	5-Feb-03/1:50 PM
Ooh yeah, I like this, even if I don't understand it. The words 'Under Will' seem to make sense; but, not sure how 'love' figures in the poem.
Re: Weekend at the Taj by <~>	20-Feb-03/1:26 PM
I like it, Zzin. I was stuck at Timberline, WV, ski resort with 10 housemates; officially: 46 inches of snow in 3 1/2 days. I concur, cabin fever has no pity.
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Feb-03/1:39 PM
Hey, I'm in Centreville, VA, and am trying to understand your poem. Is it aimed at religious money raisers on TV? My least favorite religion is the Mormons, but they're outta Utah.
Re: First Confirmation by babyBOOMER	6-Mar-03/2:09 PM
This is strong, and very timely, given our current state of international affairs. I want to read more of your work, bB.
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Mar-03/2:23 PM
I like it better than the previous one. 'pleased me..' is my favorite line. Good ale is an excellent social lubricant, especially Russian Imperial Stout.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Mar-03/11:10 AM
This is the best of the versions of this poem you've posted. More accessible.
Re: Blustered by INTRANSIT	13-Mar-03/7:45 AM
I like it just the way it is, INTRNST
Re: Icarus Down by horus8	13-Mar-03/7:47 AM
I like it, H8; but spell it 'Separating'.
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Mar-03/8:20 AM
Sttl, read the Dylan Thomas poem 'Incarnate Devil'.
Re: footprint of the american chicken by bondjedi	20-Mar-03/8:58 AM
...now, ladies. Bndjd, this is a haiku, and timely.
Re: For Pennies by Wulf	20-Mar-03/9:02 AM
Moving, Wlf. A friend of my sons', Phil, just finished his initial Marines training; he'll likely be called up soon.
Re: Monday night football, Tueasday? War. by Jeremi B. Handrinos	21-Mar-03/1:11 PM
Good topical, socio-political poem, Jrm. It matters not how ridiculous antiwar protesters look, I'm more interested in their collective perspective for America and the world than that of Rumsfeld and Wolfowitz.