Re: Bloody cow by ==Doylum	18-Jul-02/10:17 AM
Cool!
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Jul-02/6:16 PM
Oh my god!!!!!!How can no one else have actually realised that this is a John Lennon song!!!!!!!!!!!I can't believe it-who are these people and haven't they heard of muuuuuuuussssssiccc!I want to scream!!!!!!!!!Good idea though of something to do (an as if they gave john lennon a 6 when he was one of the most prestigious song writers of the modern world.
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Jul-02/6:19 PM
See my comment on instant Karma but add a few more swear words and exclamation marks due to the increased amount of people who have voted on this poem.
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Jul-02/4:00 AM
Interesting use of language in an unconventional way. An enormous sense of frustration is conveyed in the last four stanzas very vividly. The tone at the beginning is very different though. What is the reason for the change?
Re: i wake up from a dream of my mouth by silvertongueddevil	20-Jul-02/4:04 AM
Very nice. Sincere feelings of longing are conveyed. You could probably take this one further and make it more but it is good in it's own right.
Re: in the eye of the stone dragon: by Sapphire	20-Jul-02/4:07 AM
Moving and raw.
Re: The train by Art Glocken	28-Jul-02/7:39 AM
Yeah!been there. A nice light-hearted outlook at the rail situation. Muine would have been more like F*&$%ng bl*&&Y Ba"??$%rd trains!
Re: Conversation Unspoken by JuddNelson	28-Jul-02/7:48 AM
A beautiful poem, it would work on me!Did it work for you?Bit about brushing away tears made a shiver run down my spine.
Re: Precious Gift by longships	1-Sep-02/4:17 AM
A touching and heartfelt poem. Nice.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Oct-02/8:00 AM
I think this is truly beautiful. I understand the sentiment entirely and you portray it delcately and honestly. Perhaps these others simply do not understand what you are trying to say.
Re: Ambiguous Love Poem For A Girl I Once Knew by poetandknowit	29-Oct-02/9:01 AM
Thankyou for this. It's a bleak day up here and I have not yet been able to shake off the feeling of complete inaction that i woke up with. You have moved me and i now feel inspired to go and write one of me own as i haven't posted anything for a while. Keep up the good work. (I haven't voted because i don't understand the way they work out the average. eg. 3 votes of 10 will give an average of say...5.7, when correct me if i'm wrong but should it not be 10? And anyway, i don't really think that you can "rank" a poem. It is understood personally to every reader
Re: Goodbye Daddy by NewbieMe	8-Nov-02/10:35 AM
Moving.
Re: Search of Love by loneshadow29	8-Nov-02/10:41 AM
Good point, hear here!
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Nov-02/10:44 AM
quite funny, more of a monologue than a poem though!
Re: It's something about you by devina	8-Nov-02/4:22 PM
Riddled with cliche.
Re: My New Enemy??? by fallrocks87	9-Nov-02/5:00 AM
First four stanza show real emotion and the realization of a dilemma that the reader can really relate to. It doesn't flow as well as it could. the last two stanza are a bit childish with words like "boy" and "jerk". Poem did move me however but perhaps that's because i have just been fucked over myself!
Re: Spontaneous Combustion/The Moth by ellisonandrew	9-Nov-02/6:36 AM
Interesting. Yes, staying calm is the best way to attack. If who you want to attack is heading for demise the best way is to stay passive and watch it be! I liked the last line. Not sure about the relevance of the last line of first stanza. Is it appropriate to the rest of the poem?Also maybe realise was too strong a word to use as surely the moth is not stronger in the end?
Re: Complete Futility by ellisonandrew	9-Nov-02/6:39 AM
This got me! Brilliant up to the last stanza where the rhythm and flow need a little work as it doesn't fit in so well with the rest of the poem. other than that, a heart felt piece with carefully selected choice of words. Nice one!
Re: ALONE by NewbieMe	9-Nov-02/6:43 AM
This wonderfully encaptures the harsh truth in life, those that face the fact that we are all independant and alone are far stronger than those that have a herd mentality, finding strength in others. I like the way the poem moves from before this realisation to this realisation.
Re: Plastic People by cosmiccantinaguy	9-Nov-02/9:10 AM
You are more human than they will ever be. They have never come face to face with their own mortality as you have and they probably never will do until that moment when, just before they climax with their cheap little whore they look into her cold eyes and feel that she is holding her elbow tight over his fat neck so that she can take his fat wallet and leave him to lie dead in his own spunk.