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Precious Gift (Free verse) by longships
A fresh wound revealed itself today, A flood of tears, in the name of friendship, A missing link in the eyes of the world, Who gave joy and mirth to many. His cordial features no one could compare, And cheerful smile no one can replace. An example for all who knew him, A giver of life???s most precious gift, The gift of laughter. A fresh wound revealed itself today, The wound of a friendship taken away.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.0596013
Overall Rank: 6660
Posted: September 1, 2002 3:05 AM PDT; Last modified: September 1, 2002 3:05 AM PDT
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[7] Roisin @ 80.225.72.134 | 1-Sep-02/4:17 AM | Reply
A touching and heartfelt poem. Nice.
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