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Free verse № 12578

Precious Gift

Member since 2002 · Posted 1 Sep 2002 · 1 comment

A fresh wound revealed itself today, A flood of tears, in the name of friendship, A missing link in the eyes of the world, Who gave joy and mirth to many. His cordial features no one could compare, And cheerful smile no one can replace. An example for all who knew him, A giver of life???s most precious gift, The gift of laughter. A fresh wound revealed itself today, The wound of a friendship taken away.

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[7] Roisin 1-Sep-02/4:17 AM Reply
A touching and heartfelt poem. Nice.