Re: The Truth of Death by Schizophrenic	6-Jun-03/12:52 AM
Clive barker's surrogate dildo.
Re: Vengeance Lost by OneFingerAnswer	6-Jun-03/12:50 AM
The mad arab ALHAZAR, this must mean the book of the dead. The ancient ones are about. flee, flee to the safety of a moist towellette.
Re: Jeremi B. Handrinos: Part 2 by wCUNTw	6-Jun-03/12:45 AM
Aint I the lucky apple of your eye?
Re: A Moment In Nowhere by Mr Pig	6-Jun-03/12:41 AM
Twas i that tenned your pen.
Re: a comment on Barometric pressure & true love (The prince of storms) by Jeremi B. Handrinos	6-Jun-03/12:39 AM
Yeah, you're write, 'me', but I ended up liking it better this way for some reason.
Re: a comment on Theology by dougsoderstrom	4-Jun-03/9:46 PM
I'm sorry, I just had to let you know, that this comment made me chirp out loud. NOW FOR A TASTELESS PLUG! http://www.garageband.com/genre/raprock that's me on the bottom of the page, tell my mom!
Re: a comment on Her Galactic Boudoir, his make-work by Bachus	4-Jun-03/9:43 PM
I still don't quite grab what you're saying. Are you saying that because I've had a horrible life somehow that affects how I feel, and what I say? Or, how I suck a thick shaft of money ala jewtube?
Re: sorry, but i am lame by nolan	4-Jun-03/11:58 AM
I'm relieved that you're not in denial about it, anyhow.
Re: Tawn-tastic by Topaz Servias	4-Jun-03/11:50 AM
Isn't that precious. Die. Senseless plug http://www.garageband.com/go/1WU8P9SB89
Re: Dying In Silk (senryu) by scitz	4-Jun-03/11:47 AM
Enjoyable
Re: Invasion by INTRANSIT	2-Jun-03/9:55 PM
That's funny. Thanks for the email trickster, the other day. You're right it's been a blast, and to me worth every hour. Thanks for your critiques. I think I'm drunk or just gay now, but what the fuck right?! This sight has really taken my writing further than I would of ever thought plausible, and in the long run, as someone that needs writing more then anything else I believe. I believe that in itself to 'be' the real 'gift' behind Kaolin Fire's poemranker.com whether it was -=Dark_Angels=- sheer fucking brilliance, or Zinnia's eloquence, Settles insanity, or God's wife's passion I was there, you have Intransit's courage, Razorgrin's wit, Katie nievity, Nentwind's insomniatic chirpings, Beel Z bubs anectdotes, and Beakism's beak I was there, motherfucker, deal with that. I read poetry sixteen hours a day. I am a poet. I am crazy enough to say that with a sneer of contempt, and pull out my cock an piss on your shoe with a belch, fart, hello. Poemranker gave me the armor encased penis to do a thing that brazenly superior. People say, "how did you find the time? "I think" how couldn't I find the time?" I'm a writer, that's what I do with my time. I write as much as I fucking can; That's all I'm good at, and, as with everything else on this accursed planet, sometimes I aint even good at that. Poemranker is a good place to bring up your kids, trust me, I know, I live here.
Re: For Some Have Entertained Angels by kassanna	2-Jun-03/8:48 PM
Good lord I think you've done it. Let's just say this poem redefines American poetry, thankyou, now I can die completely ruined and lonely. Could you possibly shove a peanut butter kiss right up my ass? Thanks. If you meet some resistance , fear not, that's just vipersna trying to breath, ignore and push harder.
Re: a comment on The canary's last song by <{Baba^Yaga}>	30-May-03/2:46 PM
clawed and caged are two syllables each chewie, not one. Also haikus can be less then 17 syllables, according to any higher than 'intermediate' creative writing instructor.
Re: ~For Katie on her Birthday by Misha Sanz	30-May-03/12:58 PM
There are some lovely images here, and powerfully simple details. Plus I'm a sucker for Azure. I once dated the most beautiful American indian lass named Azure she was incredibly attractive, and passionate. I met her at a party and sold her some shrooms, and she left with me, it was winter in Michigan, and my car's passenger window and sunroof were blown out and I had plastic over them, my car looked like a fucking submarine/hoopdie I was so embarassed because when you hit 50 or so the cabin would pressurize it was really funny, but she could of cared less ahhhh youth. Wasn't it preciously disposable.
Re: Eric D. Brock by elizabethann	30-May-03/12:52 PM
fruitcake flame'
Re: ~Ode to My Hand by Misha Sanz	30-May-03/12:50 PM
Pretentious and totally center field. Cool structure however and simple enough to have a sense of a balance somewhere in its edited future.
Re: ~Dreams by Misha Sanz	30-May-03/12:48 PM
Well yeah?
Re: Luekemia Tacosalad by Shardik	30-May-03/12:46 PM
Why don't you do the Phillip seymour story instead Shardik. You seem to have some left handed gusto today, you fucking write it asshole. I'm going to light some vanilla incense and put in a Depeche Mode live CD and make an avacado tuna bagel medium toasted and diced picles in the tuna, touch of garlic and green onion, pour myself a glass of guava juice (fresh) with eight ice cubes. Okay?
Re: Lonely Love. by Exiled_humanity	30-May-03/12:38 PM
The last stanza saved your ass, because it's posh up until that last pretty step.
Re: a comment on While cleaning the aviary by Jeremi B. Handrinos	29-May-03/11:52 AM
Splendid, with linking verbs and grooming, ah, yes. My grandfather had Parkinson disease, and I would park him precariously at the top of the basement stairs. Leave him there for hours, and even more hours, to ponder the jagged paint chipped depths and irregular angels. Breathe down his neck rhythmicly while wispering the laws of gravity just outside of his ear. Buttering up a finely toasted warm cinnamon bagel. The crackel of that knife pulling over the sweet toasted bagel. Like cracking ice & frosty mud under well balanced frozen tires. Yes, love thy elders.