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Tawn-tastic (Free verse) by Topaz Servias
Dans mon coeur, je peux vous sentir Dans mon esprit, je peux vous voir Dans ma main, je peux me sentir le vôtre Dans mes yeux, je peux vous voir la beauté Notre temps sur la terre est fini Par mon temps avec le ciel, aucunes Vos lèvres; doux, aimant, insouciante Caresser la mine avec votre coeur Votre corps est un wanderland que je pourrais renoncer à jamais vous toucher Mon coeur comme mes mains je vous donnerai le ciel à jamais ((And for those of you who can't read it ....)) Within my heart, I can feel you Within my mind, I can see you In my hand, I can feel yours In my eyes, I can see you beauty Our time on earth is finite By my time with heaven, no Your lips; soft, loving, carefree Caressing mine with your heart Your body is a wanderland I could give up forever to touch you My heart as my hands I'll give you heaven forever

Up the ladder: On A Cliff
Down the ladder: What I Remember

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.8
Weighted score: 4.9761596
Overall Rank: 8326
Posted: June 4, 2003 5:50 AM PDT; Last modified: June 4, 2003 5:50 AM PDT
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[9] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 | 4-Jun-03/11:50 AM | Reply
Isn't that precious. Die.

Senseless plug

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[5] Carvaceous @ 209.249.42.10 | 3-Jul-03/11:11 PM | Reply
It's....tawnfabulous??
[0] Sasha @ 69.140.246.96 | 14-Apr-04/1:01 PM | Reply
I'm sorry, but you're not a native french speaker.
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