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What I Remember (Free verse) by leviathan
I heard the darkness declare from somewhere within all of this
At last, the sun is dead
I saw children crying for their Gods and their dreams
But alas, both have abandoned
and everything is dead
I saw the wars that raged between virgin armies
And a world that till death would not change
I heard faint eulogies uttered calmly to no one before
One by one souls not embraced fell painfully dead
But mostly I remember a face
Something between dreams and desire
A diamond glistening beneath an exotic sun
So vividly I remember an embrace
Everything that dreams could not create
Salvation summoned beneath a glistening sun
Deliverance
from the shackles conformed to the
destinies
of beautiful things that
decay without guidance
and devour like terror
I remember the glistening souls of everything alive that used to be here
The innocent children that played with diamonds
inside their dreams
and calmly asked God why the sun must eventually die.
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Posted: June 15, 2003 4:57 PM PDT; Last modified: June 15, 2003 4:57 PM PDT
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