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Midsummer, almost (Haiku) by Nicholas Jones found a telescope
then fell asleep before the
stars were to be seen
Up the ladder:
What I Remember
Down the ladder:
Ideology for a new era
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Posted: June 20, 2003 4:55 AM PDT; Last modified: June 20, 2003 4:55 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.9761596 Overall Rank: 8334 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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20-Jun-03/10:10 AM
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found a telescope
then fell asleep before the stars spread over me
Frustrated Immunologist
Ate the microscope then fell asleep before the SARS spread over me
Inconsistent Jesus
Bore more than a cross Started a One God Virus Then up and left town
Hmm, maybe your last line is better. A collaborative effort. Incidentally, my faltmate who has just moved out really did leave behind a telescope for looking at stars, but I think it's missing something important, like a lens or whatever. And it doesn't get dark until about half past ten in this midsummer season on our small island in northern Europe.
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