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Midsummer, almost (Haiku) by Nicholas Jones

found a telescope then fell asleep before the stars were to be seen

Nicholas Jones 24-Jun-03/5:08 AM
Hmm, maybe your last line is better. A collaborative effort. Incidentally, my faltmate who has just moved out really did leave behind a telescope for looking at stars, but I think it's missing something important, like a lens or whatever. And it doesn't get dark until about half past ten in this midsummer season on our small island in northern Europe.




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