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20 most recent comments by Jeremi B. Handrinos (101-120)

Re: Decay by INTRANSIT 20-Oct-03/2:24 PM
Might I suggest a collapsing parking structure and a legless prostitute in a rusting radio flyer?
Re: Drug Addict by SupremeDreamer 20-Oct-03/2:29 PM
Call it "Drug Addict".
regarding some deleted poem... 20-Oct-03/2:33 PM
Catchy and glandular.
Re: freewrite~1-10-10/11am by shadowaura 1-Nov-03/6:45 PM
"-over" should be 'ever'.
regarding some deleted poem... 1-Nov-03/6:49 PM
A mocumentary
Re: The Dread by scitz 1-Nov-03/9:05 PM
A perfect moment for bedazzling drug use. Used, naturally, as a smoke screen. lol.
Re: Think by necroscope7 2-Nov-03/10:43 AM
Yep!
Re: Brand-new Blue Book Jacket by Bobjim 2-Nov-03/10:45 AM
A masterpiss.
Re: Just Another Day by dougsoderstrom 2-Nov-03/10:50 AM
A bombastic ah, bomb? 12!!!
Re: the grizzly bear and the dog by A. Nomaly 2-Nov-03/4:08 PM
I laughed, I cried, you moved me Bob.
regarding some deleted poem... 2-Nov-03/7:23 PM
Easy there Saint Vaginitus you don't want to pull a glute or mis your turn.
Re: sin by ThePariahDog 2-Nov-03/8:03 PM
Even a dung beetle wouldn't roll this shit.
Re: Texas by Nicholas Jones 2-Nov-03/8:09 PM
The thing with Texas is that no matter where you stand it always smells like shit.
Re: Love (pyramus and thisbe) by New Life Drug 9-Nov-03/12:23 AM
"covered in your blood" this should be "And blood covered gloves."?

"Drive it into the heart of mine
death closes your eyes
But it will not part us
from where you lay":

This should be:

Drive into the heart of mine
Let death close your eyes
But it will not part us
from where we shall rise.



Re: True Love by Mona Lisa 9-Nov-03/4:51 AM
Vaginal and bountiful.
Re: caught in the dark by http://fenechia.com 9-Nov-03/4:57 AM
I love how you tease yourself with the thought of you even casting a reflection to judge yourself this shrewdly in the first place.
Re: In these boots by http://David Bowman 9-Nov-03/5:00 AM
Is that the equivilant to American expressing away your life to deabth?
Re: The Big Blue White Guy by Modulo 9-Nov-03/5:01 AM
Sounds Like a tail from the Dakotas.
Re: Gypsy by roses are read 9-Nov-03/5:02 AM
I bet if it wasn't for your horse you'd have never made it through college?
Re: Time by NeeMan 9-Nov-03/5:03 AM
Try string theory? Then time and gravity seem much less lofty.


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